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名古屋大・文系 English words in length (Indicate the number of words you have written at the end of your answer. Do not count punctuation such as compras or periods as words 1 200 donors and delivers blood products to those who need them. Figure A below By year the Japanese Red Cross Society collects blood from voluntary shows how the mambers of younger (between the ages 16 and 39) and older between the ages 40 and 69) blood donors have changed in Japan from 2000 to 2019, as well as how the number of all blood donors has changed for the nineteen-year period. Figure B shows the total amount of blood donated in Linear trend lines are shown in dotted lines. Japan from 2000 to 2019 7.000.000 6.000.000 5.000.000- 4.000.000 3.000.000 2.000.000 1.000.000 Figure A Age (1639 years) A Age (40-69 years) .... ● All donors B. 1999 2001 2003 2005 2007 2000 2011 2013 2015 2017 2019 Years Amount of blood donated (liters) 2.000.000 2.000.000 1,500,000- 1.000.000- 500,000- Figure B QUESTIONS 2023 17 04 1999 2001 2003 2005 2007 2009 2011 2013 2015 2017 2019 Years Adapted from: Ministry of Health, Labour and Welfare website https://www.mhlw.go.jp/stf/seisakunitsuite/bunya/0000063233.html Write three 1. Describe what the Figure A show. trend lines in approximately 30 to 50 words. (Indicate the number of words you have written at the end of your answer Do not count punctuation such as commas or periods as words.) 2. Describe the trend depicted in Figure B. and explain how the amount of blood donated per donor has changed since 2000 by referring to both (Indicate the Figures A and B. Write approximately 30 to 50 words. Do not number of words you have written at the end of your answer. count punctuation such as commas or periods as words.)

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(3)について答えはthese new types of cementまたはnew types of cement ですがthe new types of cement でも大丈夫ですか?

6 2019年度 英語 Ordinary Portland cement-t produced by baking lime in a kiln and emits approximately one ton of carb a kiln and emits Cement production is responsible for cement. dioxide for every ton of approximately 5% of global man-made CO2 emissions, according to the World Business Council for Sustainable Development. Cement does absorb some carbon dioxide back from the atmosphere over time, One 2016 study estimated that between 1930 and 2013, the equivalent of 43% of CO2 released from lime during heating was reabsorbed by - although that percentage does not include carbon concrete products worldwide dioxide emitted by the fossil fuels burned to heat kilns, a significant contributor of says. Fennell notes. 東京医科歯科大前駅 - the most common form in concrete- CO2 emissions during production. Unfortunately, this absorption comes at a price, particularly when cement is used in structures that feature steel reinforcement bars (rebar) within concrete. vl(As) CO₂ moves through cement it changes the pH of the surroundings, Fennell says. Concrete loses its alkalinity and, when moisture and oxygen are present, causes the rebar to rust. 2) ad "Rusting steel can expand with great force to as much as nine times its original dimensions if you add up all of the layers of iron oxide," says Randolph Langenbach, an international consultant in building conservation. This expansion causes the concrete to crack, flake and crumble. Svi aft ni adosband huma Degradation is a massive concern, he argues, and problems are not limited to rusting rebar. Everything from air pockets left in the concrete mix when it's laid to salt air buffeting coastal-facing walls, or the use of beach sand in the concrete, can shorten a building's lifespan. As one specialist once put it to Langenbach: "If it ain't cracked, it aint concrete."qubong ao yas guidtyns ogde stornos 90 s of fshoqml is vatns mash *** long llopsd lust ay to Given the concerns about the environmental impact and structural longevity of concrete, why do we continue to build with it? addi Simply put, concrete is cheap, versatile, quick to erect and requires no of weight J

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九州大学英語2019年の英作文の添削をお願いします🙇‍♀️ 大問4が要約と英作文、5が和文英訳です!🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️

〔4〕 九州大-理系前期 Read the following newspaper article and follow the instructions below. (36) 16 2019年度 英語 in Engligi taul" According to the Kanagawa Prefectural Police Station, a 20-year-old female university student caused a traffic death. The student was riding on a power- She moved off from an assisted bicycle when the accident happened. intersection and started riding on the sidewalk. At that moment, a 77-year-old lady was walking on the sidewalk and moved toward the bicyclist. The student hit the lady. The collision caused the lady to fall and strike her head. She was transported to hospital, but died of her injuries two days later. At the time of the incident, the student was apparently holding a smartphone in her left hand and a drink in her right while steering the power- assisted bike. Moreover, she had an earphone in her left ear. Therefore, police arrested the student for breaking the new law and riding recklessly. Police are investigating whether the student noticed that the old lady was walking toward her. They suspect that she was not paying sufficient attention because she was operating her smartphone right up until the collision. Her court appearance date has not been decided yet. The Mainichi, December 16, 2017 Instructions: Write two well-developed paragraphs in English. In the first paragraph, summarize the main points of the newspaper article above in lo approximately 100 words. Use different vocabulary and sentence structure from the original passage as much as possible. In the second paragraph, write your opinion about what should be done to reduce accidents like this in approximately 50 words. hosidinlong unich lor, condadnoah

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九州大学英語2019年の英作文の添削をお願いします🙇‍♀️ 大問4が要約と英作文、5が和文英訳です!🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️

〔4〕 九州大-理系前期 Read the following newspaper article and follow the instructions below. (36) 16 2019年度 英語 in Engligi taul" According to the Kanagawa Prefectural Police Station, a 20-year-old female university student caused a traffic death. The student was riding on a power- She moved off from an assisted bicycle when the accident happened. intersection and started riding on the sidewalk. At that moment, a 77-year-old lady was walking on the sidewalk and moved toward the bicyclist. The student hit the lady. The collision caused the lady to fall and strike her head. She was transported to hospital, but died of her injuries two days later. At the time of the incident, the student was apparently holding a smartphone in her left hand and a drink in her right while steering the power- assisted bike. Moreover, she had an earphone in her left ear. Therefore, police arrested the student for breaking the new law and riding recklessly. Police are investigating whether the student noticed that the old lady was walking toward her. They suspect that she was not paying sufficient attention because she was operating her smartphone right up until the collision. Her court appearance date has not been decided yet. The Mainichi, December 16, 2017 Instructions: Write two well-developed paragraphs in English. In the first paragraph, summarize the main points of the newspaper article above in lo approximately 100 words. Use different vocabulary and sentence structure from the original passage as much as possible. In the second paragraph, write your opinion about what should be done to reduce accidents like this in approximately 50 words. hosidinlong unich lor, condadnoah

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(5)について質問です。 答えは(A)ですが、自分は"否定的な観点から"で(B)のdenyingを選びました。なぜ(B)が違うのでしょうか。文法的に合わないからなのか英文の意味的に違うのか教えてください

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ポイントを読み取ろうと内容を確認しようの それぞれの回答があっているかの確認をお願いします 間違っている場合は回答を教えてください また、1枚目の⑥のhimってアレックスのことですか?それともアレックスの父親のことですか?

24 S2 ① Sesame Street Creates new characters from time to time. セサミストリートは時々新しいキャラクターを生み出します。) ② Mary of them reflect what is happering in the world. (彼らの多くは世界で起こっていることを反映しています。) ③ In 2013, viewers saw a new character in troduced in the US. (2013年、視聴者はアメリカで新しいキャラクターが紹介されるのを見ました。) 4 The character's name is Alex. (キャラクターの名前はアレックスです。) ⑤ His father is in jail. 彼の父親は刑務所にいます。) ⑥ Alex does not like to talk about him. (アレックスは父親について話すことが好きではありません。) ⑦ Alex's friends understand his feelings and tell him that he is not alone. + him I $4 (アレックスの友人たちは彼の気持ちを理解し、彼は1人ではないと伝えます。) ⑧ They make him feel supported. 彼らは彼に支えられていると感じさせます) 7 ⑨ In 2019, Karli was introduced. (2019年、カーリが紹介されました。) ⑩ She lives with her foster parents because her birth mother cannot care for her. (生みの母親が彼女の世話をすることができないため、彼女は着父母と暮らしています。) ① Karli's having a hard time, but her loving foster parents take care of her. (カーリは大変な思いをしていますが、愛情深い義父母が彼女の面倒を見てくれます。) ⑩ Both Alex and Karli represent children facing challenges. (アレックスもカーリも、困難に直面している子どもたちの代表です。) ③ Through there characters, the viewers learn about current social problem. 視聴者はこれらのキャラクターを通して、現在の社会問題について学びます。) 1④4 They also realize that all children have the right to feel sufe and loved. (そして、すべての子どもたちが安全で愛されていると感じる権利を持っていることに気づきます。)

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