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I'm going to talk about an experience that changed my life Was when I studied studying abroad in Niseko, Hokkaido. I stayed for a total of 2 months last summer I made a lot of friends. and this summer. Speaking in both Japanese and English deepened our bond. Even after studying abroad we l are still in touch. We are going to have a reunion in Tokyo on Christmas Actually, I hadn't been good at English before I studied abroad. A friend of mine said "Don't be afraid ". Then to me •get rid of my weakness in English. I had a conversation with my I was able to native teacher in English through the activitities. In these activities, had a We did BBQ, cooked, and went sightseeing. It was d again, I would like to go skiing. lot of fun. If I could study abroad in Niseko to Niseko. You can enjoy Niseko's lifestyle Please yo m

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2 次の英文を読み, 空所に入れるのに最も適切なものを,それぞれ下の①~④のうちから一つずつ選びなさい。 (6) When growing tomatoes, we know we should pick them when they're bright red. With carrots, however, ( 6 ) because they grow underground. ①we should pick them when they turn orange (2) it's hard to know when they're ready (3) we should grow them more carefully than tomatoes (4) it's easy to know when they're bright red (7) Although it is quick, easy and convenient to be able to look up information on the internet, it can sometimes be difficult ( 7 ) because there is so much information. to find what you are looking for (2) to improve the convenience of the internet (3) to get more than what you need that people often experie (4) to have good computer literacy (8) Would you be happier if you were richer? Many people believe that they would be. But research conducted over many years suggests that ( 8 ). People in the United States, for example, are, on average, richer than New Zealanders, but they are not happier. poorer people tend to worry about their financial problems 2 pleasure in life usually comes from great wealth (3) the best way to be happy is learning how to save money greater wealth doesn't generally imply greater happiness (9) Many European rivers were once heavily polluted by manufacturing industries. As a result, wild animals dependent on clean water disappeared. However, as stricter environmental standards took effect, rivers such as the Thames of London have become much cleaner. Consequently, ( 9 ). water quality has continued to decline wild animals avoid drinking from the Thames (3) wild animals are making a comeback in many rivers (4) wild animals no longer depend on clean water

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●以下のTOPICについて、 あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 ●POINTSは理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。ただし,これら以外の観点から理由 を書いてもかまいません。 ●語数の目安は80語~100語です。 TOPIC In many Japanese universities, students have to take gym classes. Do you think gym classes are important for university students? POINTS ●Choice ● Health ● Future inatoga ba nonnodo

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• 4 ・以下のTOPICについて、 あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 POINTSは理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただし、これら以 外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 語数の目安は80語~100語です。 TOPIC Computers are widely used in school education. Do you think computers could be better teachers than humans in the future? POINTS BCD • Feelings Cost ・Communication

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Lesson 4 Esports' Time Has apniwellot er /50 A Translate the English into Japanese and the Japanese into English. 【語彙の知識】(各1点) 1. various 形 B1 [ ] 2. 名 B1 戦闘, 対戦 3. respond B1 ] 4. strategy 名 A2 [ 5. 名 A2 社会, 世間 6. 名 A2 基本, 原理 ] B Choose the word whose underlined part is pronounced differently from the other three 【発音の知識】 (2点) 1. 7. basic イ. battle ウ. practice I. strategy 2. ア. another イ. gold 7. over I. program 3. ア. electronic 1. popular ウ. respond I. society C Complete the following English sentences to match the Japanese. 【表現と文法の知識】 1. そのテニスの試合は4月30日に開催されます。 The tennis tournament will ( 2. 私は美術や音楽のような芸術系の教科が好きです。 I like artistic subjects ( ) ( 3. 近頃, ますます多くの人が東京を訪れている。 ) and ( ) ( ) on April 30. ) art and music. (各3点) 1) people are visiting Tokyo these days. D Arrange the words in the proper order to match the Japanese. 【表現と文法の知識・技能】 Arranga. 1. プロ野球選手になるのは有名な歌手になるのと同じくらい難しい。 (各3点) Becoming a professional baseball player (as/as/becoming / difficult / is a famous singer. 2. 私にこの機械の使い方を教えてください。 Please (teach/use/to/me/how) this machine. 3. 私の試験の結果は彼女ほどはよくなかった。 My exam results (as/as/good/hers / weren't).

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ng 形や色で ものをあ Today I'd like to speak on the topic of "learning Look at the car in the slide. What from nature." color is it? I can hear you say "blue." It looks blue, but actually blue paint was not used at all on this 5 car. Can you believe that? The color was created by copying the wings of Morpho butterflies. The butterflies are inhabitants of Central and South America. Their wings shine like blue jewels and we I can see them flying even from far away. This is an example of biomimicry. 2 "Biomimicry" means "copying ideas from nature." Idea Sharing 動物や昆虫 くことをあ adjust /ǝdzist adjust to..." In fact, plants and animals have adjusted themselves to the environment. So, if humans study and learn from them, we can adopt a more eco-friendly lifestyle. Let's look at another example of biomimicry that 5 helps us in our daily lives. Please look at the left slide above. It shows a gecko. You might see these little creatures walking on house walls and ceilings. A Japanese company got an idea from the gecko's sole and created a new, strong, sticky tape. adop /add: eco /ék エニ 10

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shatter [fætor] ☐ overcome [ouvǝrkám] ☐ physical [fizikl] psychological [saikǝládzikl] illness [ílnǝs] sadness [sædnǝs] indispensable [indispensǝbl] 2 People feel lonely for different reasons: for example, their pet dies, or they move to a new town, or their dreams are shattered. To overcome loneliness, you often need bonds and a sense of belonging. There are, however, times when you are lonely because you are 5 unable to meet people for physical or psychological reasons. G1 10 Think of a boy of your age who suffers from a serious illness and must stay in bed in the hospital, unable to speak. Like you, he wants to play soccer with his friends, he wants to study at school, and he wants to express his joy and sadness. He is alone most of the day, but he has a dream: he wants to start a business to help people like himself be happier by making them feel they are useful and indispensable. His hospital is 15 only three kilometers away from his school. He cannot go there even though he wants to. Imagine how lonely Figure 2 Yoshifuji as an elementary school student 52 1. What do you often need to overcome loneliness? 2. What does the boy in the hospital want to do in the future? 3. What is OriHime like in a classroom?

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B. Complete the paragraph with words from the box. connection damaged improved normally sharp 1 2 In his book Musicophilia, brain scientist Dr. Oliver Sacks looked at the between music and the brain. He wrote about how music the lives of musicians, hospital patients, and ordinary people. Dr. Sacks also shared the experiences of different people. He gave an example of a man by a lightning strike, which-strangely-left whose brain was 3 him wishing to become a musician at age 42. Another interesting example was of a man whose memory 4 lasted only seven seconds, except when he listened to music. When this happened, his mind became very 5- with a near-perfect memory.

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Topic Agree or disagree: People will stop subscribing to printed newspapers in the future. I agree with the idea that people will stop subscribing to printed newspapers in the future. I have two opinions why I think so. First of all, to print newspapers uses a lot of papers. They are made by wood that is important nature material. The kind of nature things has limit to use, so we should not use them too much. The plants also play role in the keeping air clean. This is the reason why I think it is bad for environment. Secondly, the printed newspapers are too big to carry. Thesedays we can get it online and we cand read it all the time wherever you are. For example on the train, in office, in café and so on. For these reasons, I think people will stop subscribing printed newspapers.

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Lesson 3. Palliative Care 部突破! いま最もアツく、最もイカ Medical treatment / Health STEP P 1 Read the Article Let's learn about palliative care, medical care that relieves pain, symptoms and stress caused by serious illness. 1) Palliative care, form of health care that seeks to improve the quality of life of patients with terminal disease through the prevention and relief of suffering. It is facilitated by the early identification of life-threatening disease and by the treatment of pain and disease- associated problems, including those that are physical, psychological, social, or spiritual in nature. As defined, palliative care begins at the point of diagnosis of terminal disease and can be delivered in a variety of health care settings. In general, it involves health and social care professionals working in hospitals, communities, hospices, and voluntary sectors. 2) Palliative care has been associated with many different terms, including terminal care, care of the dying, end-of-life care, and supportive care. However, these forms of care are not necessarily the same as palliative care. Likewise, palliative care is also sometimes described as hospice care. While hospice care does imply palliative care, it is specific to care provided near the end of life. In contrast, palliative care covers the duration of a patient's illness and, hence, may be delivered over the course of years. 3) Palliative care emphasizes three main principles: 1) A team-based approach is fundamental in managing distressing symptoms, such as pain, nausea, fatigue, and depression. It is also a necessary component in meeting the physical and psychosocial needs of the patient and his or her family. 2) Dying is a normal process. Symptom management is needed in order to help patients live life to the fullest until they die. 3) The synthesis of physical care with psychological and spiritual care fulfills a vital role in the overall care of the patient. 4) Palliative care is a global concern, and a steady rise in the number of people who are living longer with degenerative disease suggests that demand for palliative care services will increase in the are areas of intense. developments such Standards Framewo and Palliative Care Indian Association health care profes intended to help physical and psyc 5) In some place For example, the and has identifie framework is int days of life. Its communication, their families, a palliative c diagnosis duration: nausea H Log in to Watch th Hear resear the 2020 co