英検準一級の英作文なのですが文法等、間違っている部分がありましたら指摘していただけると嬉しいです。

TOPIC Agree or disagree: Movies and TV programs have more negative influence than positive on how young people behave.

英作文の添削をお願いしたいです(^_ _^)

Q Write about a person who helped you and explain what you learned from that experience. (00~1507. I was helped by my junior high school band contest. I was. 3.0 (o 20 Date when you were in trouble, I was especially worried about whether the thing what help people to become happy. brass band club teacher when I was I would be able to play well or not at contest. I often very nervous and make mistakes when I think it is important or when I do something in front. of many people. I talked my brass band club teacher it and she said that playing well is important, but enjoy. playing and make people to be happy is more Ao 90 important than try to play well because music is L too much. and I could student and worried about brass 40 he When I heard it, I become not to think about plaing well F... 20 succes the contest.. 460 because 30. From this experience, I learned about well skill is not most important and should think about the true purpose. of things.. (1487) 60

教えて頂けたら嬉しいです

1 [ (1) (2) ORAMMAR EXERCISES ]内の動詞を適切な形に変えて ( This is the painting ( I think the boy ( The cat ( NARU (3) (4) I need lettuce, cheese, salt. pepper, and ( (5) Look at that little doll ( に書きましょう。 A ) by Van Gogh. [draw] next to Helen must be her new boyfriend. [stand] ) on the sofa is sleeping well. [lie] 2 日本語を参考に、 ( (1) ポルトガル語はブラジルで話されている言語です。 Portuguese is the ( ) ( (2) あそこで手を振っている女性は私の母です。 The woman ( the next meeting. ) in blue. It is so pretty. [dress] ) eggs to make this sandwich. [boil] )内に適切な語を入れ、 英文を完成させましょう。 A B (3) 東京タワーに行くのにいちばん早い方法は何ですか。 What is the quickest way ( (4) 日本では、少子高齢化社会という問題を抱えています。 We have the problem ( ) an ( ) her hand over there is my mother. ) in Brazil. in Japan. (5) 何も心配ないと思いますが、念のためテストをしてみましょう。 I don't think there's ( in case. ) society ( 3 日本語を参考に,( 内の語句を並べかえ, 英文を完成させましょう。AB (1) あなたは私と駅で9時に会うという約束を忘れたのですか｡ Did you forget your (to/me/ promise/ the station / meet / at) at nine? Did you forget your (2) 日本人の監督によって撮られた映画が賞を獲得しました。 The (Japanese / won/movie / a/ by / director / filmed) the prize. The (3) 彼の英語を話す能力は、彼の友人たちすべての称賛の的でした。 His skill at His skill at 4) 次の会議には3つの検討すべき議題があります。 (topics / examined/ have / we / be / to / three) at the next meeting. he admiration / English / of / was / all/speaking/ his friends). (専修大学改) ) Tokyo Tower? ) about, but let's do a test just ) fewer children at nine? the prize. (中央大学改) at

英作文の添削をお願いします！！ 眠い中書いたので字が汚くて申し訳ないです。

I don't think people's salaries shall be based on their job pertamance. I have two reasurs. In the first place, everyone have different skills. Many people don't always work well, so It is no equal. In the second place, if it be be hused on their age, itt's can be said to be equal. Mart geople get More a family on they get older, so they need money. Therefore, I think it is bad for people to have their salaries besed on their job performance.

英検の英作文添削をお願いします。 1行5語に合わせたり、削ったりしているので、段落や空間等は気にせずに添削をして頂きたいです。

I don't think scare people's salaries should be based on their job performance. I have two reasons. In the first place, It should be changed from their performance to age. As they get older, many people will have their family, so they need a lot. of money. If their salavies base on age, they can live in peace. In the Second place, some people don't have the skills. For example, people who have disability may not have enough skills. If their salaries be based on r their age, they can't get enough money. Last of all I think people's salaries had better be based on their age. It has a lot of benefit than being based on their job performance. Mary people can live in peace

personalが心の通ったと訳されていて In the end it was Kyle's personal communication skills and sincerity that allowed him to achieve his dream. 納得でき... 続きを読む

1、2枚目の7に入る並び替えでは SO S V という形ですが、 3枚目はSO V S の倒置になっています 倒置の時とそうじゃない時の見分け方を教えてください 実際、7の並び替えをする時にSVにするかＶＳにするか迷いました。

目標解答時間 10 31 社会 ディズニーの大きな決断 (1) 分 On April 4, 2003, Glen Keane, one of Walt Disney's most (1)respected animators, called for a meeting to (2)discuss (3)the war breaking out at the studio. Disney's animators had settled into two opposing camps: those who were skilled in computer animation and those who (4)refused to give up their pencils. Keane, a 31-year veteran who created the beast for "Beauty and the Beast" and Ariel for "The after a series of experiments to see whether Little Mermaid," (5)was a Disney traditionalist. (6) But S he could create a computer-animated ballerina, his opposition softened ( 7 )of both art forms, calling his seminar "The Best of Both Worlds." (注) veteran 「ベテラン」 traditionalist Ṁи pres and co「巷不白亜 FS 15 words) ballerina 「バレリーナ｣ 31 問 (G

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① Sesame Street also has episodes about people with disabilities. (セサミストリートには障害者に関するエピソードもあります。) ② For example, a character named Siven appears in the Israeli version. (たとえば、イスラエル版にはシバンという名前のキャラクターが登場します。) ③ Sivan is a girl who wres a wheelchair. (シバンは車椅子を使う女の子です。) She sometimes has her wheelchair pushed by her friends. (彼女は時々、友達に車椅子を押してもらうことがあります。) ⑤ At other times, she offers a hand to others as much as she can. 時には、彼女はできる限り他の人に手を差し伸べます。) ⑥ Sesame Street cha llenges traditional gencer roles as well. (セサミストリートは伝統的な性別役割にも挑戦します。) ⑦ The Indian version has some episodes where male characters cook voluntarily. (インド版では男性キャラクターが自主的に料理をするエピソードがいくつかあります) ⑧ In other episodes, female characters play soccer skillfully or do math. well. (他のエピソードでは、女性キャラクターが上手いサッカーをしたり、数字を上手にやったりします。) @ Through episodes like these, children understand how to get along with people with various clisabilities, (このようなエピソードを通して、子どもたちはさまざまな障害を持つ人々とどのように付き合っていくかを理解します。) ⑩ They also have a chance to reconsider gender stereotypes in society. また、社会におけるジェンダーの固定観念を考え直す機会にもなります。)

文法的なミスがないか確認していただきたいです！！

Writing I'I couldn't give my full strength. There are two things that I can do things for improve my writing skill. First, getting used to write my opinion in English. I will write my opinions about one theme every week. Also, I'll ask my teacher to check the opinion. Second, building up my vocabulary. I study hard especially synonym. I didn't mean to use some word many times. Therefore I want to rephrase. In addition, I want to understand nuance of English. Then I'll tell audience my opinion clearly. I took care t

文法的な誤りがないか確認してもらいたいです🙏 授業の振り返りで、speaking分野です。 書きたかったこと(日本語) 私は自分の意見と意見の間に沢山の間を空けないように気をつけました。ですが私にとってその行動は難しいです。私のEnglish skillをあげるためにでき... 続きを読む

I took care to speak which don't make many space between my opinion and my opinion. However. It is difficult for me to do this action. I have two things for improve my English skill. First, I want to build up my vocabulary. I'll check English words which I don't know. these words mean and function. Late In addition. I'll record these words in my notebook. Second, I'll listening to English radio and music. This action relate to become stronger at listening skill.