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重要 解答時間 25分 (解答・解説 P.200 ~2011 (3) Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Agree or disagree: Personal finance should be taught in school POINTS Risk of debt Balance of classes Financial responsibility ●Learning at home

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22年度第1回筆訂 4 Write an ssay given TOPIC. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. .Suggested length: 120-150 words answer sheet. Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of your Any writing outside the space will not be graded. TOPIC Should people's salaries be based on their job performance? POINTS ⚫Age Spend 2 Go fishin Company profits Motivation C . Skills 3 K 生産性が上がる→会社の利益につながる 多くのお金を得る。 barinqon gni 社員とする→お金をもらうため。 1 Her 2 Her 3. She borilep Show and worker IS E スキルをもつため。 TI by 1990sm or so of togiot H S No. 11 1 Shanti soli jon bib ogni giring. E.M

英検二級ライティングの要約問題を採点してください！ 回答：These days, some university students choose to join short-term. By doing so, they can know about companies ... 続きを読む

以下の英文を読んで、その内容を英語で要約し, 解答欄に記入しなさい。 語数の目安は45語~55語です。 解答は, 解答用紙のB面にある英文要約解答欄に書きなさい。 なお, 解答欄の外 に書かれたものは採点されません。 解答が英文の要約になっていないと判断された場合は, 0点と採点されることが あります。 英文をよく読んでから答えてください。 University students often plan for their future careers by attending job fairs or searching online for information about different kinds of work opportunities. There are other ways, too. Some of them choose to join short-term work programs at companies called internships. These have some good points. Students will be able to know more about companies they are interested in, such as what kind of jobs there are and what kind of people are working there. Also, internships allow students to get to know other students. These students can encourage each other both during and after the internship. On the other hand, if students choose to join very short internships, they may not be able to understand the job they are doing before the internships end. Also, students who take part in internships may find it difficult to do well in their studies.

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解説文の言っていることがあまり分からず自分なりに解釈したのですが、つまりこの正しい（Cを選んだ）文章はprotective clothing をthat以降が補足しているという形の文章ということですか？

29. Factory workers are required to wear protective clothing ------- that fire, electrical, or chemical hazards exist. (A) when (B) because of (C) anywhere (D) even if

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I really feel sorry for you, hearing how your hands get cold and cracked because of the cold weather and water in winter. Whenever you use water, make sure you dry your hands and then rub them until they get warm. (December 11, 1944) This letter was written by Kuribayashi Tadamichi to his wife. He was a commander on Iwoto, a battlefield during World War II. He wrote many letters to her from there. Iwoto is a small flat island that lies 1,250 km south of Tokyo. One of the hardest battles between Japan and the US was fought there. The island was a very important place for both the US and Japan. For Japan, it was the last base to protect the mainland.

BかDだと思い、空所以降がorganizationsを修飾していると考えBを選んだのですが、なぜBではいけないのでしょうか？

Questions 9-12 refer to the following article. ed Ganex Corporation Earns Workplace in Aldoria City Recognition as a Leading 10 VED ENT 21 an sbianevi Isunne erit ving notice. .qunselo Ganex Corporation has been recognized as a leading workplace in Aldoria City this year. elqmsxe 107 (0) ed lliw noitnevno ------- 9. Additionally, its strong leadership and dedicated workforce have (a) oleum evil erit. played key roles in this success. By remaining committed to everything -------work-life balance to fostering 10. professional growth, Ganex has y achieved a einebize (8) high level of employee satisfaction over the years. The accolade reinforces its standing as an industry frontrunner and will inspire other organizations ------- the well-being of their own employees. 12. ' 11. the accomplishment beside the Hartland not only sets a positive example but also contributes to Sure come prepared. Aldoria City's corporate community overall. any neces tools see you on Saturday!

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7 誤りのある箇所を指摘して、正しく直しなさい。 Interested (1) When he was Dasked why he was studying ②so hard, he replied that he was interesting in English culture. (2) With Da huge smile, Catherine ②waved her hand happily as she approached to me. what 3) That is most dramatic is to see how broad and deep the support has ①become. Wlose (4) ①For a nation ②which food culture is admired ③all over the world, Japan ①depends to a surprising degree on imported food. (5) Some psychologists believe ①what a person's early childhood ②experiences affect 3 how they behave as an adult. that (6) DUntil the middle of the sixteenth century, the European new year began ②on March 25, the which day ③when marked the beginning of spring. ①Frankly, I can't imagine ②how my life would be like ③without music; it gets me through the day. what

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(2) 自分のしたことを他人に認めてもらおうともらうまいと問題ではない。 matter/may/others It (approve/doesn't / matter / I may /* others/whether) of your work or not, It No (4 of your work or not. I don't know why but it (as me / none / I strange / the passengers uttered a word. I don't know why but it a word. (4)我々のものの見方は、 我々の知識によって大きな影響を受ける。 (5) what we view things. */18+ ⑦ we know. not f Lost water whether, of struck/that) the passengers uttered is very much affected (☞ what / ↑ view / by / I things / how / we / very much affected) we know. (5) 失ってみて初めて, 持っているものの価値に気付くことがよくある。 (6) lost a the things. We often don't recognize (♬ have // /// 5) /them/the things / until/ + the value / we / we've). + We often don't recognize T T Ø I PIB₤. エウキ I passed (I took at // but I could never the other courses / I my university / pass botany/that/all). オ I passed 10 11 (7) 我が家族は向かい側の隣人とすぐ仲良しになりました。 made friends of cur family with neighb Soon (7 the road/family/made / neighbors / our/friends/* across/ thewith) with) Soon cur (12) I across the road No. Date

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• QUESTIONについて、 あなたの意見とそ の理由を2つ書きなさい。 . 語数の目安は80語~ 100語です。 【QUESTION】 Today, many people spend their vacations overseas. Do you think the number of these people will increase in the future?