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22年度第1回筆訂 4 Write an ssay given TOPIC. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. .Suggested length: 120-150 words answer sheet. Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of your Any writing outside the space will not be graded. TOPIC Should people's salaries be based on their job performance? POINTS ⚫Age Spend 2 Go fishin Company profits Motivation C . Skills 3 K 生産性が上がる→会社の利益につながる 多くのお金を得る。 barinqon gni 社員とする→お金をもらうため。 1 Her 2 Her 3. She borilep Show and worker IS E スキルをもつため。 TI by 1990sm or so of togiot H S No. 11 1 Shanti soli jon bib ogni giring. E.M
I think that people's salaries should be based on their job performance for the following two reasons. Firstly, most workers will work hardly then before. hard If the method are not introduced, workers won't they can earn money by t by tD work hardly because they doing nothing. Thus many workers will make effort to get their salaries. Secondly, if many workers work hardly, the productive of companies will increase. Many workers want to earn money 150 they finish a lot of tasks effectively. By doing so, companies may earn money as company profit. 100
Therefore, people's salaries should be determined people's salaries by confirming their active.

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