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〔4〕 九州大-理系前期 Read the following newspaper article and follow the instructions below. (36) 16 2019年度 英語 in Engligi taul" According to the Kanagawa Prefectural Police Station, a 20-year-old female university student caused a traffic death. The student was riding on a power- She moved off from an assisted bicycle when the accident happened. intersection and started riding on the sidewalk. At that moment, a 77-year-old lady was walking on the sidewalk and moved toward the bicyclist. The student hit the lady. The collision caused the lady to fall and strike her head. She was transported to hospital, but died of her injuries two days later. At the time of the incident, the student was apparently holding a smartphone in her left hand and a drink in her right while steering the power- assisted bike. Moreover, she had an earphone in her left ear. Therefore, police arrested the student for breaking the new law and riding recklessly. Police are investigating whether the student noticed that the old lady was walking toward her. They suspect that she was not paying sufficient attention because she was operating her smartphone right up until the collision. Her court appearance date has not been decided yet. The Mainichi, December 16, 2017 Instructions: Write two well-developed paragraphs in English. In the first paragraph, summarize the main points of the newspaper article above in lo approximately 100 words. Use different vocabulary and sentence structure from the original passage as much as possible. In the second paragraph, write your opinion about what should be done to reduce accidents like this in approximately 50 words. hosidinlong unich lor, condadnoah

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[4] Read the instructions and write a well-organized answer in English. (50 points) Virtual reality (VR)* refers to a high-quality simulation of reality created by a computer. Probably the most famous use for VR so far is gaming. But VR has also been used to improve society in various fields such as education, medicine, and engineering. Describe a single specific way that virtual reality can be used to improve society. Explain your idea in detail in about 100 English words. Notes: Virtual reality (VR)*: VR systems use special glasses that completely cover the user's eyes. These glasses show a very realistic picture of a world created by the computer. In addition, the systems can tell when the user moves their head, arms, and sometimes other body parts. So users can control the action by natural movement. Some systems even let users feel like they are touching things. Thus, VR systems can make users feel like they are really in another world. 〔答案〕 I suggest you to simulation with VR. For example, doctors can practice operation. I have the three reasons. First, VR's display is very real. So doctors can do as if real simulation. Second, every one can make simulation software. If you want add patients information to VR and study how to make software, you can make VR software to yourself. Third, medical professors can use VR simulation in lecture. If they do this, Students who want be surgeon in the future will reduce about operation's anxiety. In this way, VR have a lot of possibilities that useful of medical field. For these reasons, I suggest VR simulations.

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