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2021-3 動物から作られた製品を使うのを止めるべきか?(いえ) 点物とない地域でなく着られる. ○Product quality 動物の皮でつくられた衣類はあたたかく、すである (一人のものよりも)→長い間着ることが出来るLag,wallet. →リュースする取組 cloth componyが行っている動物のことを ○Tradition 伝統的な衣類として昔からよく着られてる また、それは民族を動物の友好frendshipを表しているものもある。 御下でる In my opinion, people don't have to stop usting goods that are made from animals for two reasons, such as Product quality and Tradition. (24) Firstly, the goods, for example clothes, bag, and wallet,are stronger than artificial goods. So, we can use them for long times. Some people say that using such goods are bad for animals, but there is a cloth company which do the reuseing project for clothes with using animals in Japan, and it is remarkable Secondly, in particular cold countries, goods that made from animal. are often used sias traditional clothes or goods stuce before. And, some tell friendship with people to animals which live with for many years, B4) For these reasons, I think that people needs't stop using them. ((25) いろ (55)

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(配点 23) Everyone wants to do well on tests. Here is some advice from successful students on how to do well on tests. Listen to the teacher from the first day of class for hints about what is important. For example, the teacher will emphasize the important information by repeating it or telling you it is important. When you look over your textbook and notes again, you should already know what is important. After each lecture, look over your notes again. Come to class ready to ask questions about what you don't understand. C Look at the visual aids the teacher uses. For example, if the teacher asks you to look at a diagram or graph in your textbook, make sure you understand why that diagram or graph is important. There may be a question on the test that asks about that diagram. Study for an essay exam. Students who prepare for essay exams do better on all types of exams. Students need to know more information for essay exams than for true/false or short-answer exams. There are no hints on the exam itself, so students must learn more for essay exams. To prepare for an essay exam, always read the *material twice before you start taking notes. When you read the material the first time, it may seem difficult. When you read the material the second time, it will seem easier. This is similar to when you (1) have to find the way to a friend's house for the first time. The second time you go to your friend's house, it's easier because you know the way. It may even seem shorter because you don't have to slow down as much to check street names or landmarks. The same is true with the material you read. The second time you will already know the words and ideas. In China, they lp to stop de After you've read the material twice, take notes. At this point, you'll find that you know some of the material and can focus on what is most important. Don't ignore *footnotes in your reading. Sometimes teachers think the information in a footnote is important and will ask a question about it. Write down the important information in is in the years t your notes. After you take notes, go back and add your opinions to them. Write down For food in the desert. the ideas that you agree with and the ideas that you disagree with. People remember ants ex large number

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READING Tly man 西洋の玄関ドアと日本の玄関ドアの違いは? CD1 11~13 13 11 I have been interested in doors for many years. 12 The front doors in Western countries open inward. But in Japan most of them open outward. Why do Japanese doors open outward and Western doors open inward? Have you ever thought about this? invite A young Japanese architect gave me an interesting answer to this 5 question. He said, "In Western countries, people open the doors inward to ite others into their houses. When you open the door outward, visitors many years we na have been have to move away from the door. In Japan, for using sliding doors. Even now, many old Japanese houses still have sliding front doors. When we started to use Western doors in Japan, we had to open 10 ebem blog 01, djiw Snow, them outward. You know, in Japan we take off our shoes when we go into our houses. If we try to open the front door inward, what will happen to all those shoes? We open the door outward to make a place for our shoes." Our way of living has changed the doors in Japan. They are only doors, but they are part of Japanese culture. Us 15 918 y9dT (t)

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Part 5 Daily Life Incomplete Sentences Select the best answer to complete the sentence. Then choose the letter (A), (B), (C), or (D). 1. All participants have to arrive ten minutes before ------- scheduled appointments. (A) they (B) their (C) them (D) themselves 2. At the book reading workshop, authors read books ------- to children. Text Completion Select the best answer to complete the text. Then choose the letter (A), (B), (C), or (D). Questions 9-12 refer to the following notice. Security Notice by Artist Request The use of cellphones, cameras, smart watches or recording devices will not be permitted during tonight's performance. Guests are encouraged to leave these items in their home or vehicle to entry. Failure to comply with this ------ your 11. 9. policy will result in ---- from the venue without a refund. We greatly. 10. (A) fully (B) aloud 3. We are pleased to (A) welcoming (C) noisy (D) over ------- a new exchange student from Canada. (B) welcome (C) welcomed (D) welcomes 4. Use this robot vacuum cleaner after reading the ------- carefully.A.2 (A) systems 5. The order can -------- (A) ships (B) policies anywhere in the world. (B) to ship (C) applications (C) be shipping (D) be shipped 6. Steven began a bakery more than 20 years ------- (A) last (B) ago (C) past cooperation in creating a phone-free viewing experience. ------ 12. Thank you for your understanding. Central Theater directions A 9. (A) once (B) when (C) advance (D) prior (D) before 10. (A) remove 11. (A) anticipate (B) removing (C) removal (D) removed (B) acknowledge (C) acquire (D) appreciate 12. (A (D) automate Further details about this policy can be found on our website. (B) Come celebrate our 25th anniversary this Saturday from 5:00 P.M. (C) For information on group rates and private events, check online. (D) Check for details to see if you qualify for exclusion to this rule. 7. The air conditioner we bought was designed to turn off -------. (A) automatic (B) automatically (C) automated 8. The Momo Store also has small items you can ------- as souvenirs. (A) replace (B) borrow purchase (D) sell

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が での 第3問 第3問(配点9) Your creative writing teacher has encouraged you to write a short story. You have found a posting on a British website which has some good advice. [MD] Getting Ready to Write (well) I've been writing articles as a freelance writer for years, but I had never 問10 円 135 written fiction. For pleasure I taught myself to write short stories and finally finished my first novel! If you feel like writing your novel too, here are a few tips. Preparing to Write 1.5 teach oneself S する tip Read (a lot!) Summarise ideas Outline Create realistic characters ✓ 区 1-7 I. summarise ~をま とめる 2.8 outline あらすじ