自由英作文の添削お願いします。配点は20点です。 文字指定は200字以内です。

10 2017年度 英語 群馬県立女子大-前期 losers” と呼ばれますか。 本文に即して書きなさい。 <20点) 問5 下線部 (エ) は、 どのような “problem” ですか。 本文 に即して書きなさい。 (24) (解答欄: 問1 問2 問5 19.5cm×3行 3 19.5 cm x 101, 4 19.5 cm × 4) by Silo ydw Ⅱ 次の英語の質問に、英語で答えなさい。minafrog (205) What do you think is the most important job in Japan? Why? Sanism ad oil o (解答欄:19.5cm×20行) If much of life is seen as a race, then a person mu chance to suced hedged Sta duty to try. Many Americans enjoy against those of other (1)te are honored by being called winners not like pete and those who by bing bezin #A

英検二級ライティングの採点お願いします。 ТОРІС It is often said that computer games are bad for children. Do you agree with this opinion? 回答 I agree with the... 続きを読む

英検二級ライティングの要約問題を採点してください！ 回答：These days, some university students choose to join short-term. By doing so, they can know about companies ... 続きを読む

以下の英文を読んで、その内容を英語で要約し, 解答欄に記入しなさい。 語数の目安は45語~55語です。 解答は, 解答用紙のB面にある英文要約解答欄に書きなさい。 なお, 解答欄の外 に書かれたものは採点されません。 解答が英文の要約になっていないと判断された場合は, 0点と採点されることが あります。 英文をよく読んでから答えてください。 University students often plan for their future careers by attending job fairs or searching online for information about different kinds of work opportunities. There are other ways, too. Some of them choose to join short-term work programs at companies called internships. These have some good points. Students will be able to know more about companies they are interested in, such as what kind of jobs there are and what kind of people are working there. Also, internships allow students to get to know other students. These students can encourage each other both during and after the internship. On the other hand, if students choose to join very short internships, they may not be able to understand the job they are doing before the internships end. Also, students who take part in internships may find it difficult to do well in their studies.

英検２級のライティングの添削をお願いしたいです💦 書きたい内容↓ 一つ目　小説ファンに人気があるなぜなら、小説のキャラクターが動いているのをみれるからと映画が面白いか面白くないか評価できるから。 二つ目　収入も大切な要素 　　　　小説はファンに知られていて世界中で読ま... 続きを読む

TOPIC These days, many novels are turned into movies. Do you think the number of such movies will increase in the future? POINTS Image Income Quality

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BO (2)次は,かえで町で開催されるイベントのお知らせです。 Kaede Summer Festival We will have Kaede Summer Festival in Kaede Park in August. There will be more than 60 shops, and you can enjoy many events on stage. In the evening, you will see beautiful fireworks. Come and enjoy the summer! Schedule <Day 1> Saturday, August 10 From 9 a.m. to 9 p.m. 10:00 Yosakoi Dance 1:30 Music Performance by 6:00 Mr. William Teller Bon-Odori 7:00 Fireworks Show Information about Events Mr. William Teller will join our festival. He is a famous singer around the world. When he was younger, he lived in Kaede Town for one year. He decided to come back for Kaede Summer Festival this year. Come and enjoy his great music! <Day 2> Sunday, August 11 From 9 a.m. to 8 p.m. 000.00 00002 11:00 Dance Performance by children 3:00 Yosakoi Dance 6:00 Bon-Odori 7:00 Fireworks Show Kaede Yosakoi dance team will show their performance. They won a Yosakoi contest in Hokkaido last year. Their performance will be exciting. They have made their dance easy for the people of Kaede Town. You can dance with them! On the second day, children of the dance club at Kaede Elementary School will perform their dance. They practiced dancing hard for this festival. Enjoy their cool dance! will sď You can see the fireworks show from anywhere in the park. * Children under 13 years old can't enjoy the festival after 6 p.m. without a parent. (E) schedule anywhere どこでも W in evil won bis vti alueji ni rood asw.exp VT to adband pig box by var Joods moilimbi amox fox ral0Y+ rady (nam you of ved Imobre VIO 2008 in noble nibit won a toy tili da ni vil o bha alging so I -7-

日本の学校の9月入学の是非について100字程度で述べなさい という英作の問題です 波線を引いたところは表現が不安な箇所です。訂正あればお願いします。字数が足りていないので付け足せるところも教えて欲しいです 見にくくてすみません🙇

4. 将来 さんせい 日本人留学やすい 日本人留学しやすい →高い英語 海外から受け入れやすい能力みにつく →日本の経済 発展かつやく 海外は9月から 海外からも L → 9日入学 日本の犬 優秀な契村増→経ざい 日本の大学レベルアップ 日本人学べる I believe that Japanise school introduce Tapahushould allowse school allow to start September. School in This shift would make for Japanese students to study abload and for students from abrad to Come to Japan. In other country, the, because In other country, most school start in September Japanese school took Therefore more students from abroad. Japanese students would learn English skill to high level and these who may play an important role in Japanese economy and development in the future would be increasing and work for the reason mentioned above. I am Convinced that Japan should allow school to start in September 35 Thi n メジア 問題番号 96

⑧の始めのthat何を表していますか？？

future is not totally in my control; am not the ⑦And there was (7) a second part to the message: the fact that I am not in complete control of my life is not necessarily a bad thing. Closed doors guided (is me as much as open ones had. That's the message the present-day version of me now understands, but the 1979 version of me could only believe. That 1979 version of me who was rejected for TV jobs in Green Bay, Greenville, and Jacksonville didn't know that his 1981 version would get a job in a much bigger TV market in Los Angeles. He didn't know that his 1985 version would [B] a woman there who was to be his lifelong companion, and that his 1991 version would be given a new opportunity for (8) advancement. That early version of me didn't know that my 1999 self would eventually be laid off from that job and then move his family to Canada to take a job at a national network. But the present-day version of me can look back on all those events and see (9) that, although none of them was completely under my control, each had

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2 次のTOPICについて、賛成の意見とその理由を2つ書きましょう。 POINTSは,理由を書く 際の参考観点です (これ以外の理由を書いてもかまいません)。語数の目安は80語~100語です。 TOPIC Some people say that/the right to vote should be extended/to 16-year- old citizens, Do you agree with this opinion? POINTS ● Society Politics Rights I think that the right to vote should be ortended to 16-year- old citizens. I have two reasons to support this opinion. First, It is useful for them in the future. If they can vote, they research politiful, so they can know society. To know society is important for them maybe Second, it is useful for government, Il 10-years-old citizens vote, government can use their opinion. It is important for society to alot of opinion by citizens agree here fore, I that with now (6-year old citizen can vote. 101

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•Some people say that students should spend more time learning foreign languages. Do you agree with this opinion? (802100) I think that students should spad more time learning foreign languages. I have two reasons to support this opinion. in the future First, it is useful for them to learn foreign languages If they study foreign languages more, they can communicate with foreign people, so they can choose a lot of career. Nowdays many foreign people come to Japan, so if they speak foreign languages, it can be their help them Can Second, it makes their happy, because if they learn foreign languages, they can go abroad, also they can become friends with trip foreign people. Talkigwith foreign people makes them happy. There lore, I think that it is good for student study foreign (anguages alot. (12オーバー) オーバー

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Name: Class Student number. Eiken Grade Pre-2 Writing Practice, Email Reply 17, October 2024. 準2級 Writing 既存の 「意見論述」 の出題に加え、 「Eメール」 問題を出題 Hi! ●あなたは、外国人の知り合い (Alex) から, Eメールで質問を受け取りました。この質問にわかりやすく普 える返信メールを.に英文で書きなさい。 ●あなたが書く返信メールの中で, AlexのEメール文中の下部について、 あなたがより理解を深めるために、 下のを買う具体的な顔を2つしなさい。 ● あなたが書く返信メールの中でに書く英文の敷の目安は40~50話です。 の外に書かれたものは採点されません。 ●答が Alex のEメールに対応していないと判断された場合は、0点と点されることがあります。 Alex の E メールの内容をよく読んでから答えてください。 ● の下の Best wishes の後にあなたの名前を書く必要はありません。 of you asin boo ①どの時間から歩きはじめるの? INMI Recently, I started working part-time at a convenience store. I feel nervous, because I タイにいない. have never worked before. There are things that I don't understand, so I have to ask a lot of questions. But, my manager is kind and helps me. Do you think there will be more convenience stores in the future? それがね Your friend, Alex レジ tredi Your reply: Hi Alex. Thank you for your email. I am interested in working. By the way, I have two questions for this. Finse, when did you started working? Second. haw lang are you walking every day. your question. I don't think there will be more convenience stores in the future. Because of this, I listen to wanking part-time is very hard in a convenience store. About Best wishes, Grade Pre2 Email reply Content (内容) Coherence & Cohesion (構成) Vocabulary (語彙) Grammar (文法) Answer & reason 2 questions 理由を付けて答える 2つの質問 Links 接続詞 Total /16