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•Some people say that students should spend more time
learning foreign languages.
Do you agree with this opinion?
(802100)
I think that students should spad more time learning foreign
languages.
I have two reasons
to support this opinion.
in the future
First, it is useful for them to learn foreign languages
If they study foreign languages more, they can communicate
with foreign people, so they can choose a lot of career.
Nowdays many foreign people come to Japan, so if they speak
foreign languages, it can be their
help them
Can
Second, it makes their happy, because if they learn foreign languages,
they can go abroad, also they can become friends with
trip
foreign people. Talkigwith foreign people makes them happy.
There lore, I think that it is good for student study foreign
(anguages alot.
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