教えてください。

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誰か至急教えてください！！

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この文のスラッシュの場所があまりに少なすぎるので間違っているところや付け足すところがあったら教えて欲しいです😖😖

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SCOC振ってください。 functionは名詞ですよね？？

That's because leaders need to function comfortably in public, winning the goodwill of everyone. 分詞構文の部分の元の文はどのような文にするのがいちばん適切ですか？