英検準一級　ライティングです。 添削していただきたいです。

2021-3 動物から作られた製品を使うのを止めるべきか?(いえ) 点物とない地域でなく着られる. ○Product quality 動物の皮でつくられた衣類はあたたかく、すである (一人のものよりも)→長い間着ることが出来るLag,wallet. →リュースする取組 cloth componyが行っている動物のことを ○Tradition 伝統的な衣類として昔からよく着られてる また、それは民族を動物の友好frendshipを表しているものもある。 御下でる In my opinion, people don't have to stop usting goods that are made from animals for two reasons, such as Product quality and Tradition. (24) Firstly, the goods, for example clothes, bag, and wallet,are stronger than artificial goods. So, we can use them for long times. Some people say that using such goods are bad for animals, but there is a cloth company which do the reuseing project for clothes with using animals in Japan, and it is remarkable Secondly, in particular cold countries, goods that made from animal. are often used sias traditional clothes or goods stuce before. And, some tell friendship with people to animals which live with for many years, B4) For these reasons, I think that people needs't stop using them. ((25) いろ (55)

文頭に置くlike って「ーのに」や、「ーけれど」のように逆接っぽく訳す時はありますか？ 写真の赤いマーカーの文でそう取らないと意味が通らないと思ったのですが、、

Georgie Ella's network of volunteers sewing reusable sanitary pads grew, and to date the Pachamama Project has donated tens of thousands of period products to refugees fleeing conflict in Syria, Turkey and Lebanon, as well as women here in the UK. Beth Plus, the project is helping in other ways too. Despite affecting so many people, and being necessary for life itself, many cultures consider menstruation unclean or shameful, not a topic of polite conversation. But Ella thinks her project is giving refugees the confidence to talk about periods, as she told BBC World Service's, People Fixing the World: Ella Lambert I have seen such major change in such a short short period of time. Like, the women originally who were distributing the pads would barely even speak about it and we had it behind a curtain, and now they'll chat away about the pads with their male colleagues, anyone that comes into the shop... Georgie ほとんどない Before, most women refugees would barely talk about menstruation, they would only just, scarcely talk about it. But now they're happily chatting away, passing the time talking to other women, and even to male colleagues.

You should also indicate how far you have come in your project. :どの程度までプロジェクトが進んでいるかを示してください。 ここでcome inが「進んでいる」と訳せるのはなぜなのですか？？

一枚目のようにin whichの形を作っていく時、 この文章はどんな2つの文章に分けることができるのですか？

The park has been renovated. + We used to play as kids in it. (その公園は改修された。 + 子供の頃によ くそこで遊んだんだよね。) ↓ 関係代名詞 which を使って1つの文にす ると...... The park which we used to play as kids in has been renovated. (子供の頃によく遊んだ公園が改修され た。) ↓ 前置詞 in を前に回して...... The park in which we used to play. as kids has been renovated.

hold A accountableという熟語を知らずとも、（accountable単体であることに疑問を持ちつつ）目的語がないことからBを選べば問題ないですよね？ （900点以下のTOEICの単語帳２種に載っていなかったので高難易度の熟語のうちの1つなのではと思いました。）

28. With regard to the performance review, project managers accountable for both their personal and team achievements. (A) had held (B) were held (C) were holding (D) was held

文構造としては3枚目の写真のようになっているということですよね？？ また、そうであった場合soが形容詞の代用なのか副詞なのかをどうやって判別すればいいのでしょうか？？

1. (D) Residents were concerned about increased traffic and ------- so, considering the size of the housing project approved for their suburb. (A) understood (B) understandable (C) understandably (D) understanding car for th (a) 303 (8). (** XX (101) gaigasn Tedi

教えてほしいです！

2 次の日本文に合う英文になるように, に適する語を書きなさい。 □ (1) その島に住むなら, まるで楽園に住んでいるように感じるかもしれない。 in the island, you might feel as if you lived in a paradise. □(2)賢い生徒ならば, 校則を破るようなことはしなかっただろうに。 A wouldn't have broken the school rules. □ (3) 彼の失敗がなかったならば,その計画はうまくいっていただろうに。 his mistake, the project would have gone well. □(4) どうかここでしばらくお待ちいただけますでしょうか。 you wait here for a while ? □ (5) テレビをつけてもいいですか。 - できればつけないでいただきたいのですが。 - Do you mind if I turn on the TV? — I rather you

この英文の文法を教えて欲しいです。 (関係代名詞、不定詞など) 英語が苦手なのでどのような使い方をするのかなど教えてもらえるとありがたいです。

onference ánf(a)rans] im [éim] articipant artisǝpǝnt] sappointment isapintment] opose [prǝpouz] allenging elindsin] me to do mto do on one's appointment ... at all stantial stanf(ǝ)!] road [réilroud] instream instri:m] t is how ... e hope that... an impact on 3 In How did they come to publish their own paper? 2002, there was a study conference held by CHETNA an NGO that aims to help the children in slums. Among the participants, there were some children from a slum in South Delhi. They were shocked to learn that adults had no idea about what really goes on in a slum! To their disappointment, the children also learned that the media did not cover the issue at all! So they decided to join a project proposed by CHETNA. It was a G1 challenging plan to start a newspaper to let people know about the terrible conditions of kids living in the slums. G1 That is how Balaknama started. The children chose this name in the hope that their paper would serve as "the voice of children." In fact, their articles have sometimes had a substantial impact on society. In 15 2015, a shocking article appeared in Balaknama. It was about slum kids forced by police officers to remove bodies after railroad accidents. The mainstream media reported on the article and the government finally acted and stopped the police. 20 nsion Check id the children learn at a study conference held by CHETNA? roject did CHETNA propose? d the children name the newspaper Balaknama?

この英文の文法やtheyやitが何を表しているかなど詳しく教えて欲しいです。

onference ánf(a)rans] im [éim] articipant artisǝpǝnt] sappointment isapintment] opose [prǝpouz] allenging elindsin] me to do mto do on one's appointment ... at all stantial stanf(ǝ)!] road [réilroud] instream instri:m] t is how ... e hope that... an impact on 3 In How did they come to publish their own paper? 2002, there was a study conference held by CHETNA an NGO that aims to help the children in slums. Among the participants, there were some children from a slum in South Delhi. They were shocked to learn that adults had no idea about what really goes on in a slum! To their disappointment, the children also learned that the media did not cover the issue at all! So they decided to join a project proposed by CHETNA. It was a G1 challenging plan to start a newspaper to let people know about the terrible conditions of kids living in the slums. G1 That is how Balaknama started. The children chose this name in the hope that their paper would serve as "the voice of children." In fact, their articles have sometimes had a substantial impact on society. In 15 2015, a shocking article appeared in Balaknama. It was about slum kids forced by police officers to remove bodies after railroad accidents. The mainstream media reported on the article and the government finally acted and stopped the police. 20 nsion Check id the children learn at a study conference held by CHETNA? roject did CHETNA propose? d the children name the newspaper Balaknama?

なぜearlyを前半と訳したのでしょうか？？

100 In contrast to its poor performance early this year, the company earned a record $101.9 million in the third quarter. contrast [kántrest | kóntrast] [kantréest-trá:st] 名対照、はっきりした違い 対照的である 関 by contrast (対照的に) ■in contrast to X (Xと対照的に)は重要表現。動詞でも出る。 例 Tex Grocer marketing strategies contrast sharply with those of traditional supermarket (Tex Groceryのマーケティング戦略は、従来のスーパーマーケットとは好対照だ) performance [parfó:rmans] 業績、成績、公演、仕事ぶり、 性能 TO b a or H L 「 NO perform (遂行する、 演じる、 公演する) Ha performance review/evaluation ( 務評価、 成績評価) 「成績 181] や 「公演 307」といった意味でも出る多義語 動詞 perform も頻出 例 perform work (作業を遂行する)、 The band is performing tonight. (そのバンド は今晩演奏します) earn [5:rn] 得る、 (お金を) 稼ぐ earnings (収入) Learn money (お金を稼ぐ)、 earn a degree (学位を得る)、 earn a reputation 判を得る)といった形でも出る。 SV00 の形を取る語法にも注意。 例 The project earned him an award. (そのプロジェクトは彼に賞をもたらした) record 形 [rékard |-ko:d] 新記録の記録 ■記録する ■ [rik5:rd] 形容詞はパート7で正解の根拠にもなったことがある。 quarter [kwó:rtar, kó:rtar] 名 四半期 関 quarterly (四半期の、年に4回、季刊誌) TOEICでは、「四半期 (会社などで、1年を3カ月ずつ4つに分けたうちの1つの期間の と)」の意味で主に出る。 関連語の quarterlyも重要 354 今年前半の低調な業績とは対照的に、 その会社は、第3四半期で、 101.9百万ドルという新記録の収入を得た。