7人の罪のない人々がテロリスト攻撃の被害者だったというニュースは衝撃的だったと略したのですが被害者だったという略し方でも問題ないですか？答えには被害者になったとかかれています

(2) The news that seven innocent people were victims of the terrorist attack was shocking. Pinnocent: O victim: . ###

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・20年度第2回 Topic Agree or disagree : More needs to be done to so 98 Point • Accident 116 agree Reason I Crime Food 技術が発達する。 No. •Technology Date 120~150語 be done to improve public safety 2014 125 130 ho 警察官のパトロールや出動によって被害を少なくすることが できる。もしなかったら、たくさんの事件が起こってしょう。 Iona (= 1 7 11 3 11 312/5797 07130 薬の研究は私たちの寿命をのばすことにつながる I agree with more needs to be done To To improve public safety. There are two points to support my opinion. First, there will be less crime, because, police of patrol and they go to the place which happen incidents. I can be less. It it were not for public safety, it would causes crime. Second, technology is improving, Reserchers are able to study a lot by support from our government. For example, medicine's research is Connect to extend our life time and automation's study is easy to our life. So, improving public safely is more convinience than fall into one, I According to the reasons stated above, I think that more needs to be done to improve public safety, And, it become improve public safety is cunvinience

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2 To think that physical comfort makes for human relations is an error we make because the absence of all comfort inter- But we base it on the correct feres with good relations. observation that when a parent takes pleasure in going out of his way to provide comfort for his child, the child takes it as a proof that he is loveable and deserves care and respect. (岡山大)

(2)について質問です。 答えではa good advice→a piece of good advice となっているのですが、aを無くして a good advice→good advice にしてはだめですか？

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ウクライナからの難民を日本は受け入れるべきか。 I don't think that Japan should recept Ukrainan refugees To be sure accepting them leads to learning their and promotes Japon to become actually it is difficult. for Cince the distance from far If they comer Tot of Also there crimes and terrorisms increases. culture life and culture more global. However them to come. 1 expenses. the number of Ukraine to Japan is Japan have to spend of living to Japan 1 .. very a difference in accept Ukrainan refugees. money is. Date Oh a possibility that because of Therefore, Japan had better not 91 words their

この問題でthatが同格のthatと思っていたんですが、違うみたいでなぜ違うのか理由が知りたいです。教えて下さい。

4 The division of Germany between the Soviet Union and the West a was one feature of a bi-polar world order that capitalist and b communist states raced to develop nuclear weapons. NO ERROR

Aの1,2,3はこれで合ってますか？ 間違えていたら教えて下さい🙇‍♀️

2 Grammar Future with will, may, and might) 4.23 You can use will to give facts or predictions about the future. adol Looking ahead UNIT 12 Extra practice p. 151 To show you are not 100% sure about the future, you can use may and might. I'll be 65 in June. It'll be expensive to travel around Europe. The baby will keep us busy! It won't be easy to find a job. I'll = / will won't = will not I may go on for a master's degree. I might not be able to afford it. You can also use will with expressions like I guess, I think, maybe, and probably. We'll probably take some time off from work. Maybe we'll move to Arizona. Avoid will to talk about plans or decisions already made. Use the present continuous or be going to. I'm going to Europe next year. I'm going to visit Paris. (NOT I will go to Europe next year. I will visit Paris.) Common errors A Circle the correct options in the conversations below. Compare and practice in groups of three. 1. A What are you going to do at the end of this course? B. I'm not sure. I guess I take /I'll take another course. C I don't know. I'm going to / I may travel abroad with my brother. He thinks his classes might / can finish early this year, so we might / will be able to go in May. Don't use can for predictions. Use may or might. I may go away for vacation. (NOT I can go away for vacation.) 2. A Are your friends going away for vacation next summer? B Well, they're all going to do / will all do different things. One friend is going / will go to Istanbul. I'd love to go, too, but I don't know. I won't / I might not be able to afford it. C Four of my friends will / may be 21, so we're having have a big party. It's going to be fun. 3. A Are you going to look for a new job next year? B Actually, I just got a new job. I'll / I'm going to work for the local newspaper. How about you? C I don't know. I think I'm studying / I'll study for a certificate in nutrition. I mean, I'll / I may probably go back to school because I'm pretty sure I won't / might not get a job. Give your own answers. Who has interesting plans?

(3)の①がdelayed or overbookedなのですが、過去分詞にする理由を教えてください。また仮定法など分類で言うと何にあたりますか？

(3) When flights are delaying or overbooking, the customer service representative manning the gate can quickly become the most put-upon person in the terminal. And that's especially true if there aren't enough passengers willing to be voluntarily bumped from the flight, which means that someone with a ticket isn't getting on. 5NO ERROR

6~9の選択はこれであってますか？？ 解いてみたのですが、特にlike とalike のところがよく分かりません 間違えていたら教えてください

A Choose the correct words to complete the questions. Compare with a partner. 1. (How/What tall are you? 2. What color have / are your eyes? 3. Who / What do you look like your mother or your father? babysiq 2011 6/2 4. What / How color is your mother's hair? Is it / Are they long or short? 5. What / How does your father look like? 6. Does anyone in your family have / got blue eyes? 7. Who's got / got short hair in your class? Does anyone got / have long hair? 8. Do any of your friends look alike / like someone famous? 9. Do you know any twins? Do they look exactly like / alike? What's she = = What kind of person is she? What does she look like? = Can you describe her? danlar Common errors Don't forget to use a form of have. She's got long brown hair. (NOT She got long brown hair.)

答えは①なんですけど、どうしてmistakeだと❌なんですか？？

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