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Hi! Guess what! I got a video game machine for my birthday. I play video games online with my friends in the evenings and on weekends. The games are very enjoyable. hard to stop playing them. I sometimes play for a long time, so my mother tells When you come to visit me, you can play, too. Video games are fantastic, but it's to stop. Do you think it's good for children to play video games? Your friend, Sam me Hi, Sam! Thank you for your e-mail. 解答欄に記入しなさい。 Best wishes,

問4の並び替えはどのように考えて解けばいいのですか?

3 次は、高校生のHayato (男性) が書いた文章です。 これを読んで, 間 1~ 問6に答えなさい。 *印の ついている語句には、本文のあとに〔注〕があります。(34点) I love bicycles. I've been using my bicycle since I was a junior high school student. One morning, however, I got scared on my way to school. A car passed me really fast. It almost touched my bicycle. There are only a few *bicycle lanes in my town, and I think some of those lanes are too narrow for a bicycle to use safely. I wanted to make our streets safer for cyclists, and then I read about "Copenhagen, Denmark in a bicycle "magazine. It's Aas one of the most *bicycle-friendly cities in the world. I learned more about the city on the Internet and thought it's really a wonderful city for cyclists. I'd like to write about it. In Denmark. 90% of the people have a bicycle, and in Copenhagen, 49% of the workers and students go to work or school by bicycle (27 % go by car, 18% by bus or train, and 6% on foot). Many streets in the city have bicycle lanes and bicycle traffic lights, and there is even a bicycle bridge named "The Bicycle "Snake." I was "envious of the cyclists in Copenhagen because the city is bicycle-friendly in every way. You can ride a bicycle at 20 km/h without B at red lights even when the traffic is busy, and you can bring your bicycle on trains and buses. In the 2019 ranking of "Bicycle-friendly Cities," Copenhagen was No. 1 and Tokyo was No. 16. ② A lot of people were using cars in Copenhagen, too, but around 1980, the city started making better roads and rules for bicycles, and the number of bicycle users started increasing. Around 2017, the number of bicycle users in Copenhagen became almost the same as the number of car users. I was also surprised to see that the number of bicycle accidents in Copenhagen was "lower than in other large cities. I think it's because the roads (cyclists for safe/follow/ and/ are cyclists the traffic rules. In many Japanese road safety classes, children are taught that roads are dangerous and sometimes shown shocking scenes of traffic accidents, and they learn that they must follow traffic rules when they ride a bicycle. But in Denmark. children play games in their classes. They can have fun when they learn traffic rules. Now there is a movement in Japan that gives children road safety classes in this way. Bicycles are cheaper than cars and healthier. They're also friendlier to the environment. The United Nations expects that about 70% of the people in the world will live in big cities by 2050. Such a large number of people will cause some problems, and more traffic is one of them. Copenhagen is a very good role model for Sustainable cities and communities" which is one of the U.N.'s "Sustainable Development Goals. I think Copenhagen's ideas to increase the number of bicycle users are wonderful because people there don't have to stop doing anything. They choose bicycles because the city is designed in a way that using a bicycle is more convenient than using a car, bus. or train. However, after the number of bicycle users increased, more parking spaces are needed there. (3 To make a bicycle-friendly city, just making more bicycle lanes isn't enough. We must think about the future of our cities. Denmark has made a lot of great plans and has more exciting plans for the future. For example, it's going to build a "bicycle" "superhighway" between cities and other areas by around 2045. I definitely want to ride a bicycle on it some day! 〔注〕 be cared おびえて こわがって bicycle lane 自転車専用の車線. レーン cyclist ...... 自転車乗りの人、サイクリスト pass…………〜を追いこす。 通り過ぎる narrow ・・・・・・幅が狭い Copenhagen コペンハーゲン (Denmark 「デンマーク」の首都) magazine 雑誌 on foot... 徒歩で bicycle-friendly... 自転車にやさしい traffic light...信号 (traffic は 「交通 (量)｣)

中学文法で添削してほしいです🙇🏻‍♀️

I which do you like better, summer or winter? 8 14611 A. I like winter better. I was born in winter, so I am -good at playing winter sports. Also, my mother gives me a lot of birthday presents. 2 Q. What did you eat today and how was it? aum.airt evol atne 8 A. Today, I ate cooked fish. I often go to the river. to fish (fishes) with my father. Also, I like cooking So I sometimes cook dishes. for my family.. What is your dream? 8 | A. My dream is teacher who work in school. My mother on is a teacher. I was often taught her, so I want to be a like her. 16 開3年後 (音読した回数) 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

問3 ェ 問5 イ 問6 ウエ なぜそうなるのかの解説お願いします

次の英文は,日本にホームステイしているエミリー(Emily) のことを書いたものです。これを読んで問いに答えなさい。 Emily is a high school student from the U.S. She is interested in Japan very much. She came to Japan and has stayed at Taro's house for one month. She is enjoying her stay in Sapporo. (1) One day, she went to a movie with Taro. The movie was really nice, so it made them excited. After that, they took a *subway to go back to their home. Emily was telling him what she thought about the quiet. He said, "Please talk in a small voice. movie_in_a *loud voice on the subway, so Taro In Japan, we are usually quiet on the subway." She was surprised to hear that, so she said to Taro, "Sorry, but I don't know why we have to be so quiet. In the U.S., we can talk with each other on the subway. Sometimes some people dance and sing a song." This time Taro was surprised to hear that. ① The next day, Emily was talking with Taro's father. She said, “Today I saw something *strange when I was on the subway. There were so many people and most of them could not sit down. Only one *seat was *empty, but *no one tried to sit there." Taro's father answered, “Did you see a sign near the seat? That seat is only for people who need some help like *elderly people or *pregnant women, or people with special *needs. *Even if there are no elderly people standing on the subway, other people won't sit there. The *priority seats are on the buses and trains in many towns in Japan, but the seats like this only in Sapporo." Emily thinks everyone should give a seat to elderly people or pregnant women. By doing so, they won't need special seats on the subway. Emily will stay in Sapporo for more two months and そうすることで (E) subway T loud... 大きな strange... おかしな, 奇妙な empty 空いている no one ~ ・だれも~しない seat... elderly ･･･ 高齢の even if ~・・・ たとえ~でも

5の（1）はこれでもokですか？

① 次の英文は、ALT のホワイト先生 (Ms. White) が,英語の授業で 「英語の学習方法」について話 をしたものです。よく読んで、 1~5の問いに答えなさい。 (注) textbook (s) = 参考書 both = 2人とも chance (s)=機会 you Do like English? We have four English classes in a week, and I think you study English hard in | breakfast every day. Do you my class. How do you study English at home? I study Japanese A know any useful ways to learn the language? I started to study Japanese at high school in Australia. Mary, my friend, started to study Japanese, too. We were 15 years old then. I studied Japanese by textbooks a lot, but Mary didn't use textbooks so much. She watched Japanese movies. Three years later, I could read and write Japanese, but speaking and listening were difficult for me. For Mary, speaking and listening were easy, but she couldn't read and write Japanese well. I thought that was interesting. So I started to speak and listen to more Japanese, and Mary started to read and write more. We also ② | them on the Internet. We sent e-mails and sometimes talked made some Japanese friends. We A And we have with them in Japanese on the Internet. Now Mary and I are both 24 years old, and we can use Japanese better than many Japanese friends. So we have many chances to talk in Japanese, and I think it is the most useful way to learn the language. There are many ways to learn English. I hope you'll try many ways and find a good way for you. 1 A には同じ英語が入ります。 当てはまる英語を1語で書きなさい。 2 ① ② にそれぞれ当てはまる語を下から選び、適当な形にかえて英語1語で書きなさい。 find show use take bring 3 次の文は,ホワイト先生が話をしたことについてまとめたものである。 空らん あ 当てはまる適当な英語を,本文からそれぞれ連続する 2語で抜き出して書きなさい。 い に Ms. White studied Japanese with textbooks, and Mary watched Japanese movies. Three years later, Ms. White could read and write Japanese, but speaking and listening were あ her. For Mary, speaking and listening were easy, but she couldn't read and write Japanese well. Ms. White hopes we will find a い to learn English. 4 本文の内容と合っているものを,次のア~エから一つ選び、記号で答えなさい。 アホワイト先生は,生徒たちは授業であまり熱心に勉強していないと思っている。 イ ホワイト先生は, 15歳のときから日本語を学んでいる。 ウホワイト先生は,日本人の友達とインターネットでときどき, 英語で話をした。 エホワイト先生は,参考書を使うのが言葉を学ぶための最も役立つ方法だと思っている。 5 本文の内容について,次の(1),(2)の問いに英語で答えなさい。 ただし、()内の語数指定に従 うこと。 (1) How many English classes do the students have in a week? (5) (2) Did Ms. White start to study Japanese when she came to Japan? (3語) 点の45 0 6 115

3.4枚目が問題文、5枚目が答え、1.2枚目は問題を解くときに必要な文です。 なぜこの答えになるのかがわからないので教えてください。 解くのは大変だと思うので、一問だけでも大丈夫です。

2 次は, 高校1年生の Yusuke が書いた英文です。 これを読んで、 問1~間6に答えなさい。*印 のついている語句には、本文のあとに 〔注〕があります。(34点) My father loves *dinosaurs and *fossils. He (he/them/in/collects/is/that/interested /so) dinosaur toys, small fossils and books about dinosaurs. I heard he tried to find fossils along the river with my grandparents when he was young. When I was younger, my family took me to the science museum every year. My father loved looking at the dinosaur fossils there, and he always explained them to me. So, I got interested in dinosaurs and fossils, too. My father has a restaurant near our house, and he displays some dinosaur teeth fossils in the restaurant. One day, he introduced one of his customers to me. The man, Mr. Shirai, also loved dinosaurs and fossils, and often visited museums all around the world, such as in America, Canada and China. He realized that my father was interested in the same things because of the fossils in the restaurant. They became good friends. One day in September, Mr. Shirai came to my father's restaurant and showed me a fossil. It was a beautiful fish fossil in a brown stone plate. I was surprised to see it, Mr. Shirai A me a lot about the fossil. He traveled to Germany to look for fossils, and he found many fossils there such as fish, animal bones and leaves. The area is very famous for "archaeopteryx fossils. I once saw a picture of the archaeopteryx fossil in a book, so I wanted to go to see the fossil in -4-

(1)の答えがchoosing、(2)の答えがウ、(5)の答えがアで、それぞれなんでその答えになるのかと、 5⃣の本文を上から4行、4行、5行、4行、3行、2行で分けた時それぞれに題名を付けるとしたらどうなりますか? 教えて欲しいですm(_ _)m

5 次の英文を読んで, あとの問いに答えなさい。 <川越東改> Origami is the Japanese art of folding paper. To do origami, the artist starts with a square piece of paper. Some people like to use special origami paper that is two colors. The front of the paper is one color, and the back of the paper is another color. Other people like to use origami paper that has patterns on it. After ①(choose) your paper, you can find many instructions for folding the paper into different things. Many people enjoy (make) origami flowers, animals, or things ( 3 ). For all of these things, there are a few kinds of folds that you need to use. For example, sometimes you need to fold the paper in half. Sometimes, the paper must be folded from corner to corner. If you follow the directions carefully, you can create a beautiful paper flower or animal. However, origami is more than folding paper. First, origami is an important part of Japanese life. For example, nature is important in Japan. In Japan, people care about the seasons, weather, water, or other things in nature. Origami is also a part of nature. That is why the most popular origami shapes are things like animals. Birds, fish, flowers, and stars are all popular shapes. It is a quiet activity, and can calm the mind and body. People who do origami like the activity as much as the art. They like it because origami demands a lot of attention. When people think hard about creating something, they forget about their problems. This allows them ④ to calm down. ⑤ Origami is also good for teaching children. They also learn to work carefully. Also, origami has squares and triangles. These shapes are important in all kinds of learning. Origami helps children to learn about these shapes. Maybe you can try to do origami yourself. You only need some paper and a book of instructions. You can find instructions for many origami shapes on the Internet. instruction direction (1)①,②の( )内の語を適する形にかえなさい。 (2) 30( に適するものを, ア~エから1つ選びなさい。 (3) (4) 7 to paint with 1 to talk with 1 (2) making. to play with I to help with (イ) ④に適するものを,ア~エから1つ選びなさい。 Origami is also easy to learn. 1 Origami is also good for your imagination. Origami is also difficult to learn. I Origami is also good for your mind. ⑤にはA~Cの文が入ります。 自然な流れの文章になる配列を, ア~エから1つ選びなさい。 A Children must follow these steps exactly. B First, origami has many steps. C This way, children can learn to follow instructions. ア A-B-C イ A-C-B B-A-C I B-C-A (5)本文の内容にあうものを, ア~エから1つ選びなさい。 If you follow some instructions for paper folds, you can enjoy many different origami shapes. Learning origami gives us a good chance to help animals on the earth. You may feel tired if you try hard to do origami carefully. I The most important thing for children's education is origami. (土)

この問題の(4)なのですが、 I will try anything faster than any other student in my class. どんなことも他の人(クラスメート)よりも早く挑戦する と解答したのですが、あっていますか？ 添削お願いします。

19 ハルナ(Haruna) がヒューズ先生 (Mr. Hughes) と話をしています。この対話文を読んで、 [1]~[(3) に入る最も適当なものをそれぞれあとのア~エのうちから一つずつ選び、その 符号を書きなさい。 また、対話文の内容に合うように、 (4) に入る言葉を英語で書きなさい。 ただし、語の数 は10語程度(.?! などの符号は語数に含まない。) とすること｡ Haruna Mr. Hughes, do you have time ? Mr. Hughes Of course. Do you have any questions? Haruna:Yes, at the end of the class, you said, "Be the first penguin." (1) Mr. Hughes: All right. You know penguins, right? Penguins are birds that cannot fly but car swim in the sea. Haruna Yes, of course. I have seen them in an aquarium. Mr. Hughes : Some people say that there is no leader in the world of penguins but that is not true. When they catch food or run away to a safe place, one penguin moves first, and then the rest of them (2) Haruna Mr. Hughes: Wow, that's very interesting. For example, (3) | to jump into the sea to catch food because there is sometimes danger in the sea. But when one brave penguin jumps into the sea, all 0000/r

英語、塾まであと10分だから助けて( ¯−¯ )

13 定着 基本文③ 次の英文がなりたつように, (1) People call Ken-chan. (2) His performance made (3) Mr. Ito gave (4) Their efforts に適する語を( (he, his, him, himself) excited. (they, their, them, theirs) (we, our, us, ours) (come, keep, give, take ) に適する語を書きなさい。 a lot of homework. the city clean. 4 定着 基本文③ 次の日本文にあう英文になるように, (1) 人々の前で話すことは私を緊張させます。 in front of people (2) 多くのよいコメントがその歌手を有名にしました。 Many nice comments the singer (3) みんなが彼女をプリティ・キティと呼びます。 Everyone (4) ボランティアの活動が町を美しく保っています。 Volunteer activities the town Pretty Kitty. 内から選んで書きなさい。 □ 意味も確認しよ 5 定着 基本文 ③ 次の日本文にあう英文になるように, ( )内の語(句) を並べかえなさい。 (1) その本は彼女を作家として有名にしました。 The (famous/as/ made/book / a/writer/ her). (3) 5人の子供たちがスミス夫人をいつも忙しくしています。 (Mrs. Smith / always/ busy / children / five / keep). nervous. (2) 私は妹に誕生日ケーキを作ってあげました。(cake/a/my/made/ birthday/I/ sister). (4) その物語を読むとあなたはとても悲しくなるでしょう。 ( sad / will / the story / very/you/reading/make) .

わからないので教えてください

本文を読んで,英問英答を解こう。 7. What is Riku's dream? ( 7 words) ① 陸の夢はなんですか? Dream is to inventatime machine 8. What were inventors in the past interested in centuries ago ? ( 7 words) ここで何世紀も前に興味を持っていた過去の発明者は何ですか。 9. How did inventors like Leonardo da Vinci learn some of the secrets of flight? レオナルド・ダ・ヴィンチのような発明家は、ひこうのひみつをどのように 学んだのですか。 ( 9 words)