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TOPIC In Japan, some people say that famous tourist sites, such as castles and temples, should limit the number of visitors. Do you agree with this opinion?

問4の並び替えはどのように考えて解けばいいのですか?

3 次は、高校生のHayato (男性) が書いた文章です。 これを読んで, 間 1~ 問6に答えなさい。 *印の ついている語句には、本文のあとに〔注〕があります。(34点) I love bicycles. I've been using my bicycle since I was a junior high school student. One morning, however, I got scared on my way to school. A car passed me really fast. It almost touched my bicycle. There are only a few *bicycle lanes in my town, and I think some of those lanes are too narrow for a bicycle to use safely. I wanted to make our streets safer for cyclists, and then I read about "Copenhagen, Denmark in a bicycle "magazine. It's Aas one of the most *bicycle-friendly cities in the world. I learned more about the city on the Internet and thought it's really a wonderful city for cyclists. I'd like to write about it. In Denmark. 90% of the people have a bicycle, and in Copenhagen, 49% of the workers and students go to work or school by bicycle (27 % go by car, 18% by bus or train, and 6% on foot). Many streets in the city have bicycle lanes and bicycle traffic lights, and there is even a bicycle bridge named "The Bicycle "Snake." I was "envious of the cyclists in Copenhagen because the city is bicycle-friendly in every way. You can ride a bicycle at 20 km/h without B at red lights even when the traffic is busy, and you can bring your bicycle on trains and buses. In the 2019 ranking of "Bicycle-friendly Cities," Copenhagen was No. 1 and Tokyo was No. 16. ② A lot of people were using cars in Copenhagen, too, but around 1980, the city started making better roads and rules for bicycles, and the number of bicycle users started increasing. Around 2017, the number of bicycle users in Copenhagen became almost the same as the number of car users. I was also surprised to see that the number of bicycle accidents in Copenhagen was "lower than in other large cities. I think it's because the roads (cyclists for safe/follow/ and/ are cyclists the traffic rules. In many Japanese road safety classes, children are taught that roads are dangerous and sometimes shown shocking scenes of traffic accidents, and they learn that they must follow traffic rules when they ride a bicycle. But in Denmark. children play games in their classes. They can have fun when they learn traffic rules. Now there is a movement in Japan that gives children road safety classes in this way. Bicycles are cheaper than cars and healthier. They're also friendlier to the environment. The United Nations expects that about 70% of the people in the world will live in big cities by 2050. Such a large number of people will cause some problems, and more traffic is one of them. Copenhagen is a very good role model for Sustainable cities and communities" which is one of the U.N.'s "Sustainable Development Goals. I think Copenhagen's ideas to increase the number of bicycle users are wonderful because people there don't have to stop doing anything. They choose bicycles because the city is designed in a way that using a bicycle is more convenient than using a car, bus. or train. However, after the number of bicycle users increased, more parking spaces are needed there. (3 To make a bicycle-friendly city, just making more bicycle lanes isn't enough. We must think about the future of our cities. Denmark has made a lot of great plans and has more exciting plans for the future. For example, it's going to build a "bicycle" "superhighway" between cities and other areas by around 2045. I definitely want to ride a bicycle on it some day! 〔注〕 be cared おびえて こわがって bicycle lane 自転車専用の車線. レーン cyclist ...... 自転車乗りの人、サイクリスト pass…………〜を追いこす。 通り過ぎる narrow ・・・・・・幅が狭い Copenhagen コペンハーゲン (Denmark 「デンマーク」の首都) magazine 雑誌 on foot... 徒歩で bicycle-friendly... 自転車にやさしい traffic light...信号 (traffic は 「交通 (量)｣)

（3）と（4）を教えて欲しいです🙇‍♀️

=)] Every year, more and more foreign people are coming to live in Japan. The number of tourists visiting Japan is growing, too. Many of them don't know what to do in an earthquake. It's necessary for us to be prepared to help them. Wakaba City had an evacuation drill for foreign residents and visitors yesterday. In the drill, they experienced some simulations and learned how they can protect themselves. They followed instructions given in English and easy Japanese. The city handed out an evacuation map (made by Wakaba Junior High School students. The map uses simple symbols and pictures. It shows people where they should go in a disaster. A 10 We interviewed some students at the school. One said, "We're glad to help foreign people. It's important for everyone to help each other and and work together." Yesterday was a good start. Everyone should be prepared. 15

①〜④の質問の答え方を教えてください！！

本文を読んで,次の質問に答えましょう。 Is the number of tourists visiting Japan growing? The fo In the drill, what did the foreign residents and visitors learn? 3 What does the map made by the students use? 4 Why do the students feel glad?

（2）の問題でなぜnumber が三人称単数なのにjoinsじゃないんですか？？教えてください🙇‍♂️

Do you know how ( ) ( ) ( (2) ボランティアグループに参加する若者の数が増加しています。 The number of young people ( ) increasing. groups ( (3) 彼は世界中に名の知れた偉大な科学者です。(アとイに入る語を答える) AND ) ( woml )( )? (鹿児島ラ・サール高) ) (東京・明治大付明治高)

この問題に当てはまる語わわ教えてほしいです お願いします🙏 予想..let me see

(2) "Do you know Mr. Baker's phone number? "Well, ( ) me ( "" ) . Maybe it is in my pocketbook

この写真の答えでも良いですか？ （4）（a)と（5）で良いですか 答えは （4）が It is September 14. (5)がたてに　一番　です

3 次のジョン(John) とミサキ (Misaki) の対話文を読んで、あとの問いに答えなさい。 John My mother's birthday is September 14. I want to buy something for ① (she) ( ) : ( ) go shopping with me? Misaki: OK. (John and Misaki come to a clothes store.) Misaki: What does your mother want? John : Ⅰ don't know. Do you have any ideas? Misaki : How ( ③ ) this T-shirt? John : Good. But my mother has a lot of white ④ (T-shirt). And her favorite color is red. Misaki: Look. That red T-shirt is funny. It has some kanji characters on the front. John How do you read them? Misaki: Ichiban. It means "number one." John : It's very nice. My mother likes funny things. How ( ⑤ ) is it? Misaki: It's 1,900 yen. mening John OK. I have 2,500 yen, so I can buy it. My mother's clothes size is M. Misaki: Wait, John. You mean an American size, right? John : Yes, I do. Misaki: Look at this table. Japanese sizes and American sizes aren't the same. A T-shirt in Japanese M is too small for your mother. John :Oh, I see. Thank you, Misaki. My mother's size is ( ⑥ ). Misaki: That's right. 注 want to 〜 〜したい clothes 服 kanji character 漢字 front 前 thing size サイズ wait 待つ American アメリカの table 表 same 同じ her 1 (1) ①④ ( )内の語を適する形にかえなさい。 2 下線部②が｢ぼくと買い物に行ってくれる?」という意味になるように、( De go shopping with me? you (3) ③,⑤ の ( に適する語を書きなさい。 S ⑤ much X (4) 本文の内容にあうように、次の質問に英語で答えなさい。 (a) When is John's mother's birthday? September 14... (b) What color does John's mother like? She likes red.. (5) ジョンは母親に,どのようなTシャツを買うつもり ですか。 対話の流れにあうように、 右の絵に漢字を書 き入れ Tシャツのデザインを完成させなさい。 前 サイズ対応表 日本 アメリカ XXS XS S, M L XL S M L XL XXL 1979 - T-Shirts に適する語を書きなさい。 後ろ #2 文社

長いですが、(1)〜(6)まで教えてください🙇‍♀️‪‪ お願いします。

4 次は, 光輝 (Koki) が英語の授業でしたスピーチの英文です。下の表 (Table) を参考にして, あと の問いに答えなさい。 表1 外国人訪問者数(年別) 年 人数(人) 2012 8,358,105 2013 10,363,904 2014 13,413,467 2015 19,737,400 2016 24,039,700 2017 28,691,073 表 2 外国人訪問者が訪日前に期待していたこと (2018年1月~3月期: 複数回答) 全国籍 74.1% 57.5% 45.2% 42.4% 35.2% 20.4% 項目 日本食を食べること ショッピング 自然・景勝地観光 繁華街の街歩き 温泉入浴 伝統文化体験 韓国 79.1% 54.7% 33.8% 36.2% 36.9% 8.9% 〈注〉 foreign 外国 (から)の visitor 中国 62.2% became become 62.6% 53.4% 44.5% 39.9% 16.8% Hi, I'm Koki. I want to talk about foreign visitors to Japan. Today, many people come to Japan from foreign countries. The number of foreign visitors to Japan is becoming larger every year. When we look at Table 1, we can find that the number of foreign visitors to Japan became more than 20,000,000 in (). Also, the number of foreign visitors in 2017 is more than three times larger than that in ( Ⓒ ), What do foreign visitors want to do in Japan? When we look at Table 2, we can learn that about 74% of the visitors to Japan 3want to ( ) ( ) ( ). About 58% of them want to go shopping, and about 45% of them want to see nature in Japan. Visitors from China are more interested in going shopping than visitors from other countries. Visitors from America are more interested in seeing nature in Japan than in going shopping. From Table 2, we can also learn that about 35% of foreign visitors want to take a bath in hot springs. That means some foreign visitors want to have special experiences in Japan. They also enjoy staying in ryokan. Also, about 20% of foreign visitors want to have traditional Japanese experiences. I heard that some foreign people try to make soba and some foreign people try shodo. Many foreign people go to small cities or towns to have those special experiences. But they may have problems with language then. If foreign visitors and Japanese people can't communicate with each other, foreign visitors can't realize their plans. Many people come to Japan from various countries. Their language is not only English. But English is widely used around the world. When the Olympic Games are held in Tokyo in 2020, more foreign people will come to Japan. We may have chances to help foreign visitors then. I think communicating with foreign visitors will be important. What should we do for it? アメリカ 87.2% 41.3% 45.4% 42.8% 26.4% 46.2% be interested in ~に興味がある experience three times larger 3倍大きい nature may 〜かもしれない take a bath ふろに入る hot spring 〜とやりとりする communicate with the Olympic Games オリンピック held hold (〜を開催する) の過去分詞 realize ~を実現させる various さまざまな widely

長いですが、(1)〜(6)まで教えてください🙇‍♀️🙏

4 次は, 光輝 (Koki) が英語の授業でしたスピーチの英文です。 下の表(Table) を参考にして, あと の問いに答えなさい。 表 1 外国人訪問者数(年別) 人数(人) 年 2012 8,358,105 2013 10,363,904 2014 13,413,467 2015 19,737,400 2016 24,039,700 2017 28,691,073 表 2 外国人訪問者が訪日前に期待していたこと (2018年1月~3月期 : 複数回答) 全国籍 74.1% 57.5% 45.2% 項目 日本食を食べること ショッピング 自然・景勝地観光 繁華街の街歩き 温泉入浴 伝統文化体験 42.4% 35.2% 20.4% 〈注〉 foreign 外国 (から)の visitor 韓国 79.1% 54.7% 33.8% 36.2% 36.9% 8.9% Hi, I'm Koki. I want to talk about foreign visitors to Japan. Today, many people come to Japan from foreign countries. The number of foreign visitors to Japan is becoming larger every year. When we look at Table 1, we can find that the number of foreign visitors to Japan became more than 20,000,000 in (). Also, the number of foreign visitors in 2017 is more than three times larger than that in () What do foreign visitors want to do in Japan? When we look at Table 2, we can learn that about 74% of the visitors to Japan 3want to ( @ ) ( ) ( ). About 58% of them want to go shopping, and about 45% of them want to see nature in Japan. Visitors from China are more interested in going shopping than visitors from other countries. Visitors from America are more interested in seeing nature in Japan than in going shopping. From Table 2, we can also learn that about 35% of foreign visitors want to take a bath in hot springs. That means some foreign visitors want to have special experiences in Japan. They also enjoy staying in ryokan. Also, about 20% of foreign visitors want to have traditional Japanese experiences. I heard that some foreign people try to make soba and some foreign people try shodo. Many foreign people go to small cities or towns to have those special experiences. But they may have problems with language then. If foreign visitors and Japanese people can't communicate with each other, foreign visitors can't realize their plans. Many people come to Japan from various countries. Their language is not only English. But English is widely used around the world. When the Olympic Games are held in Tokyo in 2020, more foreign people will come to Japan. We may have chances to help foreign visitors then. I think communicating with foreign visitors will be important. What should we do for it? became 中国 62.2% 62.6% 53.4% 44.5% 39.9% 16.8% three times larger 3倍大きい nature É take a bath ふろに入る hot spring communicate with 〜とやりとりする widely the Olympic Games オリンピック become be interested in ~に興味がある experience アメリカ 87.2% 41.3% 45.4% 42.8% 26.4% 46.2% may 〜かもしれない various さまざまな held hold (〜を開催する) の過去分詞 realize ~を実現させる

長いですが、(1)〜(6)まで教えてくださると嬉しいです！！ お願いします🙇‍♀️

4 次は, 光輝 (Koki) が英語の授業でしたスピーチの英文です。 下の表 (Table) を参考にして, あと の問いに答えなさい｡ 表 1 外国人訪問者数(年別) 人数 (人) 8,358,105 10,363,904 13,413,467 19,737,400 24,039,700 28,691,073 年 2012 2013 2014 2015 2016 2017 表2 外国人訪問者が訪日前に期待していたこと ( 2018年1月~3月期 : 複数回答) 全国籍 74.1% 57.5% 45.2% 42.4% 35.2% 20.4% 項目 日本食を食べること ショッピング 自然・景勝地観光 繁華街の街歩き 温泉入浴 伝統文化体験 T 〈注〉 foreign 外国 (から)の visitor 韓国 79.1% 54.7% 33.8% 36.2% became 36.9% 8.9% 中国 62.2% 62.6% 53.4% 44.5% 39.9% 16.8% Hi, I'm Koki. I want to talk about foreign visitors to Japan. Today, many people come to Japan from foreign countries. The number of foreign visitors to Japan is becoming larger every year. When we look at Table 1, we can find that the number of foreign visitors to Japan became more than 20,000,000 in (). Also, the number of foreign visitors in 2017 is more than three times larger than that in ( 2 ) What do foreign visitors want to do in Japan? When we look at Table 2, we can learn that about 74% of the visitors to Japan Ⓡwant to ( @ ) ( ℗ ) ( © ). About 58% of them want to go shopping, and about 45% of them want to see nature in Japan. Visitors from China are more interested in going shopping than visitors from other countries. Visitors from America are more interested in seeing nature in Japan than in going shopping. From Table 2, we can also learn that about 35% of foreign visitors want to take a bath in hot springs. That means some foreign visitors want to have special experiences in Japan. They also enjoy staying in ryokan. Also, about 20% of foreign visitors want to have traditional Japanese experiences. I heard that some foreign people try to make soba and some foreign people try shodo. Many foreign people go to small cities or towns to have those special experiences. But they may have problems with language then, If foreign visitors and Japanese people can't communicate with each other, foreign visitors can't realize their plans. Many people come to Japan from various countries. Their language is not only English. But English is widely used around the world. When the Olympic Games are held in Tokyo in 2020, more foreign people will come to Japan. We may have chances to help foreign visitors then. I think communicating with foreign visitors will be important. What should we do for it? アメリカ 87.2% 41.3% 45.4% 42.8% 26.4% 46.2% become be interested in ~に興味がある three times larger 3倍大きい nature É take a bath ふろに入る hot spring communicate with experience may 〜かもしれない realize ~を実現させる various さまざまな 〜とやりとりする widely < the Olympic Games オリンピック held hold (〜を開催する) の過去分詞