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SNSを使ったいじめをなくすにはどうすればすいか述べま
Recent years,
the number of SNS bullying have increased.
Most of them happen among junior high and high school
Students
I think it
the best that schools held
about SNP fullying
classes about
are
is
/
Date
face-to-face conversation
Go wis understanding
easily
Students need to learn about how SND bullying happen and
Sentences
that
easy
to misunderstand
This makes
students think of how to
own SNS
schools should teach SNP bullying
use
On SNP, there is
No
occurs
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Answer 1

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Hiro トビタテ留学JAPAN

Recut yours, the musher of SNS bullying,have increared .
Most of them happen among junior high and high serol students. I think it is the best that schools hold classes about SNS bullying. On SNS, there is 1 face-to-face conversation, so hisunderstanding occurs easily .
Students heed to learn about how SNS bullying happen and sentences that are easy to misunderstand. This makes students think ot how to use own SNS. Therefore, schools should teach SNS bullying .この文章でよろしいでしょうか。
合ってると思いますよ^ ^

Hiro トビタテ留学JAPAN

To eliminate bullying through SNS, we need to consider the following improvements:

"Recently, incidents of SNS bullying have increased, particularly among junior high and high school students. I believe the most effective approach is for schools to conduct educational sessions addressing SNS bullying. Since online interactions lack face-to-face communication, misunderstandings easily arise. It is crucial for students to understand how SNS bullying occurs and be aware of statements prone to misinterpretation. This awareness will prompt students to reflect on their own SNS usage. Therefore, schools should actively educate students about the impact and prevention of SNS bullying."こちらの文章の方がまとまっていて、いいかもしれません。

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