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Your text is well written 👍 . I have few remarks.
❓ Please look at this picture,
👉 I don't know what you mean by this. Did you mean something like "When you look at the full picture, ..." ?
✅ there are three positive features of AI.
✅ In my opinion, AI has three positive features.
👉 ALWAYS put a space after a comma! Without space, the text looks ugly.
❌ First,it
✅ First, it
❌ costs,and so on
✅ costs, and so on
✅ First, it will save time and reduce mistakes
△ because of doing routine work and working long hours with AI.
✅ because AI can do routine work and work long hours.
✅ Second, AI can reduce various costs.
✅ For example, overtime pay, personnel costs, and so on.
👉 The second sentence has no verb, so it's better to make one sentence:
✅ Second, AI can reduce various costs, for example overtime pay, personnel costs, and so on.
✅ Third, AI can be used to perform tasks in dangerous areas.
✅ On the other hand, AI also has negative features.
✅ First, we can’t understand AI's thought process.
△ If we don't that, we don't know the cause when trouble occurs.
✅ As a result, we don't know/understand the cause...
✅ Second, AI can’t respond to words that have not been learned,
✅ and it is difficult for AI to read people’s emotions.
△ As a result, humans and AI should
👉 "As a result" is used for a natural consequence, but not for a conclusion
✅ In conclusion, I believe that...
△ shortage
✅ shortcoming, weakness
✅ In conclusion, I believe that humans and AI should coexist by complementing each other’s weaknesses.
Keep up the good work!
