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☆彡.。‎𖤐 ̖́-‬𓆩⋆𓆪‬

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年月が経つにつれて、彼はより賢くなりました。
祖父はよく、人に健康を失って初めてそのありがたさを
Roben Erbi qulfu(36
PR 12 Y en 17 & ER. EEE PAST".
生きているだけで幸せでした。
どんなに忙しくても、必ず少なくとも6時間は
睡眠を取るべきだ。
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Roja Azz / ₁² cert.
内容がすばらしければ皆が真剣に耳を傾ける。
As years went by," he became smarter.
My grandfather said that it is not until
people get sick chat we realized the value.
He was happy to live inspite of
However busy you are
(
lose all property.
Even if
listen in earnest
ve
we never
took sleep in six hours.
fail t
hear a little English, everyone
as far as
The contents is meaningful.

Answer 1

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taka

基本的構文はしっかりしていると感じます。単語や語句を少し直せば、もっと良くなります。
以下の修正は、あくまでも一例です。参考にしてください。

・As years went by, he became smarter. 〇
・My grandfather used to say that it is not until we get sick that we realize the value of good health.
・He was happy to live in spite of losing all his property.
・However busy we are, we should have a sleep for at least six hours.
・Even if your English is a little hard to understand, everyone will listen to you in earnest as long as the content is meaningful.
※as far as＋S＋V～　Sが～する範囲までは＜範囲＞　　as long as＋S＋V～　Sが～しさえすれば＜条件＞、Sが～する間は＜期間＞

☆彡.。‎𖤐 ̖́-‬𓆩⋆𓆪‬

詳しくありがとうございます😭

taka

My pleasure!😊