Question

tkhsre

英作文の添削をお願いします🙏

TOPIC
Some people prefer to buy food produced in their local area. Do you
think more people will buy locally produced food in the future?
651 sur 9
ne
POINTS
● Local economies
● Safety
Dyslexia
of the brain works, and her
The environment
bophet

There are
I think that more people will buy locally greduced food in the future.
Two reasons why I think so.
To begin with, it is good for us to buy locally produced food..
For example, we
can buy I
more cheaply.
43 In addition, buying it
is good for the local environment.
So, if we buy it many more, we
can have
good effect to the
67
environment J
For these reasons, I think that more people will buy locally produced food
in the future.

Answer 1

カイケツ

安全性についての記述がないですね。
例をひとつ出しておきます。

It's safe because we can see where it was made.
どこで作られたのか分かるので、安全だ。

環境に良いのは言うまでもないです。どう環境にいいのかを言うべきです。

It is good for the environment because the transportation distance is short.
輸送する距離が短いので環境にいいです。

強調のときはmanyではなくmuchです。

have a good effect on〜
〜にいい影響をもたらす
toではないです。頻出です。よく覚えておきましょう。
effectがimpactやinfluenceとなっていても同様の使い方ができます。一緒に覚えておきましょう。

私から言うことは以上です。