Question

SYNATAROu

英語のスピーチを授業内でしないといけないのですが、この文章は文法的に大丈だか確認して頂きたいです！
ちなみに、テーマは"日本の何かについて"です。よろしくお願いします🤲

I'm talking about Japanese hot spring culture. Japan
has many hot spring resorts that attract many
foreign visitors.Especially Atami, Kusatsu, Beppu and
Yufuin are the famous districts of hot spring.They
have a number of benefits which hot water does not
have.They help relieve fatigue, improve health and
have a healing effect.The open-air baths in the spa
area have a great view and are very impressive! And
there are many precautions to take when entering a
hot spring. For instance, not putting your towel or
hair in the hot water.Rinse or pour hot water over
your body to cleanse it before entering the hot
spring.All of them are necessary to keep the hot
spring water clean.Thank you for listening.

スピーチ,作文,ライティング

Answer 1

SYNATAROu

和訳です。