英作文の添削をしてほしいです。文法的なところとか、スペルだけでもいいので、お願いします！何を書いているかわからなければ、言ってもらって全然大丈夫です！

4 POINTS TOPIC Agree or disagree: Japanese companies should require employees to use English in their workplace al ●Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words 18 ●Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of your answer sheet. Any writing outside the space will not be graded. ■Communication barriers 言語の壁 LExpansion of market 市場の拡大 ●Labor shortage 人員不足 Stress b ストレス 日本語は難しい と言われている。 total:128 words 英語を使えば、日本語を話せないが、 日本で働きたい外国人の雇用につながる ―海外進出商品のに人知度叩かも、 ・海外のニーズに応じた 商品づくりもできる Galaxy A54.5Gの解しょう もし社員が英語を話せたら。 外国人の雇用につながる ・経済が

英検準1級ライティングの添削をお願いしたいです！何を書いているか全くわからなければ、言ってもらえると… あと、筆記試験90分の間でライティングを書かないといけないんですけど、本当にライティングが苦手で、少しでも短時間で良い文章を書くコツを教えてください！具体的に言えば、英文... 続きを読む

Write an essay on the given TOPIC. OUse TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC or disagree: More companies will allow employees to work from 情報セキュグ 危ない disag Agree home in the future POINTS ●Information security Communication Recruitment Cost reduction I do 1 仕事の内容の 外部漏れの危険 1 not agree home in the future and I have two reasons to support Day 2 Day 3 ・直接コミュニケーションをとれない一誤解を招くおそれ (記録をしないと) 相手と商談や会議等の連絡をメールや コスト削減。 電話しないといけない手間がかかる。 Day that more companies will allow employees to work from 4 this opinion... on One of the reason is that employees cannot communicate on meet easily. They have to keep in touch with partner about importan things such as meetings the phone or e-mail, so they might take so much time to do this. Also, might make mistakes if they do not communicate on the phones or e-mail without s keep records of communication. Day they Another of the reason is that it companies might need to improve employees houses information security.. If do not do this, documents might be seen by companies many people such as employees' familys, and visitors to them, For these reasons abore, more companies will not allow employees to work from home if these problems are solved. total: 143 words Da 6

英検準1級のライティングです。 どなたでも構いません。添削をお願いしたいです！何を書いているか分からなければ、聞いてもらって全然大丈夫です。ていうか、読んだだけでは、全く理解できないと思います。 近日中に受けるので、明日の夕方頃までにお願いします🙏

Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Do you think that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future? 電時の排出 POINTS 走行エネルギーの asse). Environment Convenience #1124-Kat #veg Cost Industry 高速産 ・充電せった コストが高い 産業限られた 短いきが しが ・使用者が買いかえようとは 思わない 2:33. 1 充電スペースの 2015 3. cars will be replaced by electric cars I do not think that gas-powered opinion. in the near future, I have two reasons to support this One reason is that it may be not convenient for people to drive electric cars in these days society. For example, electric cars take more time to charge than gas-powered cars. Moreover, electric cars can run few distance. Onother reason is that electric cars cost a lot of money in the many situation. For example, people who use electric, cars usually sex charging places at the each houses, but they have to pay so much cash to do it, Also, they need to prepare too much money every month to charge electric Propte cash, For these reasons above, I believe that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future. total: 179 words

英検　準ニ級　リーディングの添削お願いします 問題文は. Do you think it is better for students to study alone or in a group? です

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英検準2添削お願いします 質問はDo you think it is good to buy used products? です

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英検二級の英作文の練習をしているのですが、写真の中でなにか添削するところはありますか？ ご指摘していただけるならおねがいしたいです。

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今度、英語でカルフォルニアディズニーランドを紹介するのですが、あまりにも英語が苦手なので授業の前に誰か添削をしてください。お願いします！！！ 単位がかかってるんです！！！

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なるべく今日中に作文の添削お願いしたいです

3 which country would you like to visit on a school trip, the UK. America or. Australia? I have two I would like to visit Australia on a school trip. reasons why I think so. First, The sea is very beautiful in Australia. We can see the sea that we can't see in Japan. Second, Many people can speak Japanese. My pearents told me that they went to han Australia for their honeymoon, they were surprised that many people can communicate in Japanese. So, we can feel safe, in Australia. There for, I would like to visit Australia.

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4. ライティング 15 ● 以下の TOPIC について、あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書 きなさい。 ●POINTSは理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したもので す。ただし、これら以外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいませ the future Ⅰ have Two reasons why I think ん。 so. To begin with, father increase telework 語数の目安は80語〜100語です。 ●解答は、右にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。 なお、解 these days. It makes him so relay and no 答欄の外に書かれたものは採点されません。 ● 解答がTOPIC に示された問いの答えになっていない場合や、 strees. In additon, I think so that spreds TOPIC からずれていると判断された場合は、0点と採点され Internet technology. Insing ipad in school. ることがあります。 TOPIC の内容をよく読んでから答えて 53 ください。 合う There are young people using it. For these reasons, I think the number of these people will increuse in the fature. TOPIC Nowadays, more and more people are at home and teleworking. Do you think the number of these people will increase in the future? POINTS Communication • Infectious disease • Internet technology 英検2級 weknow by Interstate 練習シート interstate.co.jp 練習日: 2/2 ④ ライティング解答欄 指示事項を守り、文字は、はっきりと分かりやすく書いて下さい。 太枠に囲まれた部分のみが採点の対象です。 Skype セッションで添削を予約>> I think the number of these people will increase in 10 15