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Write an essay on the given TOPIC.
Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer.
Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion
Suggested length: 120-150 words
TOPIC
Do you think that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the
near future?
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POINTS
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Environment
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Cost
Industry
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・充電せった
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・使用者が買いかえようとは
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2015
3.
cars will be replaced by electric cars
I do not think that gas-powered
opinion.
in the near future, I have two reasons to support this
One reason is that it may be not convenient for people to drive
electric cars in these days society. For example, electric cars take more
time to charge than gas-powered cars. Moreover, electric cars can run
few distance.
Onother reason is that electric cars cost a lot of money in the many
situation. For example, people who use electric, cars usually sex charging
places at the each houses, but they have to pay so much cash to do it,
Also, they need to prepare too much money every month to charge electric
Propte
cash,
For these reasons above, I believe that gas-powered cars will be replaced by
electric cars in the near future.
total: 179 words

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