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英検準1級ライティングの添削をお願いしたいです！何を書いているか全くわからなければ、言ってもらえると…
あと、筆記試験90分の間でライティングを書かないといけないんですけど、本当にライティングが苦手で、少しでも短時間で良い文章を書くコツを教えてください！具体的に言えば、英文には直せるのですが、書きたい事自体がなかなか思い浮かばないです。どんな些細なことでも構いません🙏
日曜日に受験なので、明日の夕方頃までにお願いします🙇

Write an essay on the given TOPIC.
OUse TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer.
Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion
Suggested length: 120-150 words
TOPIC
or disagree: More companies will allow employees to work from
情報セキュグ
危ない
disag
Agree
home in the future
POINTS
●Information security
Communication
Recruitment
Cost reduction
I do
1
仕事の内容の
外部漏れの危険
1
not
agree
home in the future and I have two reasons to support
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2
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・直接コミュニケーションをとれない一誤解を招くおそれ
(記録をしないと)
相手と商談や会議等の連絡をメールや
コスト削減。
電話しないといけない手間がかかる。
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that more companies will allow employees to work from 4
this
opinion...
on
One of the reason is that employees cannot communicate on meet easily.
They have to keep in touch with partner about importan things such as meetings
the phone or e-mail, so they might take so much time to do this. Also,
might make mistakes if they do not communicate on the phones or e-mail without s
keep records of communication.
Day
they
Another of the reason is that it companies might need to improve employees houses
information security..
If
do not do this, documents might be seen by
companies
many people such as employees' familys, and visitors to them,
For these reasons abore, more companies will not allow employees to work from
home if these problems are solved.
total: 143 words
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