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I think all cities should have banned smoking
on sidewalks and other public places.
I have two reasons to support my opinion.
First, it is not healthy for people to smoke.
For example, If they are smoking, they have a desease.
Second, it is not safety for people to be on sidewalks.
For instance, If there are heavy traffic, they
bump into people.
For these reasons, I think all cities should have.
banned smoking on sidewalks and other public places.

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Answer 1

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First, it is not healthy for people to smoke
→First, cigarettes are not healthy for people
Smokeを重複して使わない方がいいと思うので

Second, it is not safe(‪✕‬safety) for people to be on sidewalks.

For instance, if there is heavy traffic, they bump into people.
→For instance, if someone is smoking in a crowd, many people could be secondhand smoke.
　＊second-hand smoke(副流煙)

こんな感じでどうでしょうか？

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