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エ think Japan shanld do more to photect its historic Sifes. u
1 have two
veasons to 9upport my opinion。
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Firstly. I think tHey are very usefel for educefron, By lerning
and visiting there,
we can leorn how the, ancrent peeple
had lived there or. how alofhes they had put on and son
Leoramg them leool us to anderstand aur anci ent who
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had Creoted this Jopan Secondy. Japan depend?
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toutism so that histic Sifes whech. are
one of the biggect
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totirism Tndusthy
are indespensable, Not only. Sreign paple
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bat alo other tfectares lo/e to vrsit there.
Therebte, histforc Sifes , temples and caster, have lo
ty
be more affention. If they were Some destreyed parts,
we ofe feqaited to Fepait the forts
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ユ thonk Japan shald keep its
For those reason
histokic Srfes ptofecting .

Answer 1

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By learning and visiting there, we can learn how the ancient people had lived there or how clothes they had to put on, and son.
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We can learn about how the ancient peoples lives were like.
We can learn how the ancient people survived, what clothes they were wearing, and more.

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Therefore, historic sites, temples and castles, have to be more attention. If they were some destroyed parts, we are required to repair the parts.
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Therefore, we have to pay more attention to historic sites, temples, and castles. If there was any broken parts, we are required to repair those broken parts.

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