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Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Do you think that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future? 電時の排出 POINTS 走行エネルギーの asse). Environment Convenience #1124-Kat #veg Cost Industry 高速産 ・充電せった コストが高い 産業限られた 短いきが しが ・使用者が買いかえようとは 思わない 2:33. 1 充電スペースの 2015 3. cars will be replaced by electric cars I do not think that gas-powered opinion. in the near future, I have two reasons to support this One reason is that it may be not convenient for people to drive electric cars in these days society. For example, electric cars take more time to charge than gas-powered cars. Moreover, electric cars can run few distance. Onother reason is that electric cars cost a lot of money in the many situation. For example, people who use electric, cars usually sex charging places at the each houses, but they have to pay so much cash to do it, Also, they need to prepare too much money every month to charge electric Propte cash, For these reasons above, I believe that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future. total: 179 words

英検準1級の勉強で日本語訳についての質問です！ Nothing that robots can perform space operations more efficiently, この部分の訳を自分なりにしたら、 写真1枚目の下から3行目のようになるのですが、 正解の... 続きを読む

<疑問> Pile 10 Nothing that robots can perforam space opperations more Diciently. L.ロボットが宇宙オペレーションを何もないより 効率的にできる ロボットより宇宙オペレーションを効率的に できないものはない ○ロボットは宇宙オペレーションをより効率的にできる

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英検準1級 でる順パス単 > feast (0331) [fi:st] 祝宴,大宴会[≒banquet], 楽しませてくれるもの [≒treat] 動大いに飲み食いする,にごちそうを出す BACK Over two-hundred guests were invited to the wedding feast. 披露宴には200人を超える招待客がいた。 NEXT TURID ホーム トレジム 戻る |||| 機能 メニュー

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「アニリンの塩基性(pKb=9.4)は、アンモニア(pKb=4.19)よりもはるかに低い。その理由を2つ述べなさい。」という問題がありました。 解答は「アミノ基の非共有電子対がベンゼン環上に共鳴により非局在化されること、ならびにベンゼン環が疎水性であるため、溶媒和による安定... 続きを読む

酸性度 低 高 NH4+ CH3NH3+(CH3)2NH2 + (CH3)3NH+ 9.81 pKa 9.26 NH3 pKb 4.74 低 - 疎水性 10.64 CH3NH2 3.36 塩基性度 CH3 H2O (H3C-N+-HH2O CH3 H2O 水和しにくい 10.73 (CH3)2NH 3.27 高 [H2O] (CH3) 3N 4.19 H (H2O H2O H2O HH2O H-N-HH2O H₂O 水和による安定化 430 たとえば, アルキルアンモニウムイオンにおいては, メチル基が電子供与性なので,3 級アミン(アルキル基が3つ結合しているアミン)のプロトン付加体がもっとも安定と考 えられる.したがって, 酸性度は, 3級 2級 1級, アンモニアのプロトン付加体の順 に高くなると予想される.逆に,共役塩基の塩基性度の強さはその逆の順番になるはずで ある。しかしながら, 水中での pKa はこの順序にはならない. もっとも酸性度が低いの は2級アミンのプロトン付加体である. 3級アミンのプロトン付加体におけるメチル基に よる電子供与性効果は, 2級アミンのプロトン付加体よりも確かに大きい。 しかしなが ら,メチル基は疎水性であるため,3級アミンのプロトン付加体の水和による安定化効果 は,アンモニアのプロトン付加体と比べて非常に小さい.よって,3級アミンのプロトン 付加体の酸性度は比較的高い.

英検準1級の添削お願いします。 Communication through computers or smartphones has good influence on people. I think that communication through comput... 続きを読む

9002N port 1 HURRAYS No Date Topic Communication through computers or smartphones has good influence people Points = time difference, share the same messages, take face to I think that Communication through computers or smartphones had bad influence on I have two reasons to support people. my opinion. First of all, it makes people not to talk face to face. These days, many people use a phone while they communication eachother. For example, they use message and call by phone Therefore, they don't have an opportunities to talk directly. Second of all, sometimes it makes us misunderstand. In particular, using message is hessesarly to communicate Caused misunderstand. in writing and thus, it This situation have a neggative effect on relationship at the worse. case.. ectly call by phone at the worse case. at worse, In the worst case, According to the reasons I mentioned above, Communication through computers or Smartphone is not good for us.

英検準1級のライティングの添削をお願いします。 前回のライティングテストでは、構成が1点でした。そして内容 構成 語い 文法のうち1つも満点がありませんでした。 Topic: Should the facilities at train and bus stations i... 続きを読む

英検準1級のライティングの添削をお願いします。 前回のライティングテストでは、構成が1点でした。そして内容 構成 語い 文法のうち1つも満点がありませんでした。 I think that a license should be required to ride a bi... 続きを読む

英検準1級のライティングの添削をお願いします。 前回のライティングテストでは、構成が1点でした。そして内容 構成 語い 文法のうち1つも満点がありませんでした。 次のテストで高得点を取りたいので よろしくお願いします。

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英検準1級のライティングが毎回悪いです。 1回目 内容 3/4 、構成 1/4 、語い 3/4 、文法2/4 2回目 内容 1/4、構成1/4、語い3/4、文法3/4 こんな感じで毎回ライティングの点数が1番低いです。 2回で共通しているのは、構成が... 続きを読む

Will Societies fature? with low birthrites face. Prents: Workforce, Foodshortige, Technological Innovation, Environment problem. I disagree with the idea. I have two reasons to my opinion. to get on important to First of all, it doesn't cause a foodshortage If the number of people increased, Some people who Live ChrA Parthe popularity decreased, it with bat country can't get the food enough. if food. That is Cause food problem. a Crisis in the not cause Płoblem Second of all,. it doesn't cause an environmental problem. These days, many trash is in ocean and on the ground. This kind of problem is Caused by the people decreased, the number of trash will inclined. foo Support In conducian, I think that low birth raten twon't food shortage and an enviroment a Is marraige becoming less important today than it was in the past ?! I agree with the idea. I have two reasons to support my opinion... university. ability of their studying, their much First of all, having children cost much money. It goes saying Therefore, to support their that these days many students parents must pay money. Secord of all, some women wants to live alone. (Vowadays, the number of women is who is working increasing. As a result, they can have enough money to live by themself so they don't think it is necessary to marry. increasing is is becoming less important. In conclusion, I think that their money problem and the number of people who want to be independent the problem that the marraige is