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英検準1級のライティングの添削をお願いします。
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Young people today
than young people
Awareness, Culture, Family, Lifestyle
Points.
I disagree
Support
Date
are more likely to help others
the past.
in the
with the idea. I have two reasons to
my opinion.
First of all, young people can't care other people.
These days, many young people feels stressful about their
relationships
•Therefore, many of them think being
alone is.
Comfortable. This situation makes them to be
difficult to take care of others ch
In conclusion,
Take care
Second of all, they don't prefer to help someone.
Recently, young people's mental' is wick because
of they don't have enough confidence. As a result,
they hestitate to communicate and chelp others
many young people don't like to..
others and can't take care others.

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