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英検準1級のライティングの添削をお願いします。 前回のライティングテストでは、構成が1点でした。そして内容 構成 語い 文法のうち1つも満点がありませんでした。 Topic: Should the facilities at train and bus stations in Japan be improved for disabled people. Points: Number, Necessary, Money, Time

I think that the facilities at train and bus stations in Japan shouldn't be improved for disabled people. I have two reasons to support my opinion.

First of all, the facilities are enough for disabled people. These days, many cities are becoming diversity, and thus they are comfatable for disabled people.For exsample, people who is on wheeling chair feels easy to move because of universal design is expanding in Japan.
Second of all, building facilities cost a lot of money. If train and bus station's facilities be improved, too much money will dissapear for disabled people. This situation has a negative effect on normal people, since Japanese government use money for disabled people, not for normal people

According to the reasons I mentioned above, many facilites are already In Japan and they cost a lot so it is unnessesarly to Improved them.

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