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Today, many elementary school students have their own cell phones. Do you
think they should be allowed to take their cell phones to school?
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they elementary School students should be allowed to
I think
take their
them
at
of
cell phone
to school
because
if
they can
It will be safe for
Communicate with
their parents
school. Sometimes, they might be late to go back to home
parents might be very worried.
because
some work school;
Their
about what happened to their kids. Also, even though some
people may worried about the possibility that they would not be
concentrate in work,
school can
make
a
rule
able to
phones
Such as put their
So that their
in to the specific box when they arrive to the school
wered by their
to avoid
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