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people
I agree with more
should become vegetarians in the
future. I have two reasons.
Firstly, it is bad for
the environment to have live stocks.
Having live-stacks have many bad
prints For instance, farmer have
to use large water. By
using whater too much, gloval.
warming will be increasing.
Also, farmer have to make
food for animals, so they
will use large gas or electric..
Secondly,
metabora
they eat a
• because th
lot of wents or fishs.
Meat and fish contain ail,
so they attect our health
badly. Vegitable have less oil,
and enough nutrients. Many people
will protect their health, and
Can live longer. Therefore, it
is good for us to
become vegetarians. I think we
should eat only vegetable.

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Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer.
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