Question

みみ

写真の英文に文法ミスがないかチェックしてもらいたいです！
お願いしますm(_ _)m

Italk about what i did on the weekend.
This weekend,I went to the tenjin with my mother and grandmother.
We ate pasta for lunch. I like carbonara so l ate it.
Iwas happy because l ate it after a long time.
I'm not very good at cooking, but I want to be able to make delicious pasta.
After that we went to a clothing store.
We bought new clothes there.
Iwas happy because l was able to buy cute clothes.
I'm looking forward to wearing those clothes and going out.
Finally we went to the cafe.
There were many sweets made with strawberries.
Tlike strawberries, so l was happy to eat them.
We took a lot of pictures because they looked cute.
lenjoyed eating a lot of delicious sweets.
Iwant to go to Tenjin with my family again.

Answer 1

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🍙おにぎり🍙 #Belle🥀とペア画中

I am going to talk about what I did on the weekend
これから話す↑

After that,
コンマ大事です！

i was happyが多いので、i enjoyed shopping because i
could buy....にしたほうがいいです。ableだけでなくcanも使えますよ

to wearing←to の後に動詞をつける、またはto無しで動名詞をつける

we went to the cafe.どこのカフェはまだ文中に出てきていないのでa cafeのほうがいいです。Finally,コンマも忘れずに

i was happy to... i was pleasantや他の表現に変えるべきだと思います

みみ

なるほど！ありがとうございます🙇