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英検準2級の英作文です。添削して貰えると嬉しいです。

o you think it isgood for children to watch TV?
1 think that watching TV is qod for children I have
TWO reasons. tist, they can Watch news on
Kay intersted in
gaverment. Second.they have to Time
auth family. If they hatch Tl wth tanily, they can covestin
a lot.
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What is the best age for people to start leaming Englich?
Three yens is the best
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because irs important to listen
Eaglish. Balby leaza lovgn ages by eas A(so baby is interested
things Frglish is ue in junior hgh schd and
high schoal, for exaomle And balld relationdips with Fordiguad
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to
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the best age
yens

Answer 1

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Q1 政府を書くんだったらスペルはGovernment❕
　　Secondで、家族との時間が必要。だと書きたかったら、They need time with their family.の方がいいかも❕

If we watch TV with our family,we can have a lot of conversations.(家族でテレビを見たら沢山会話ができる)

Q2の書き始めは"I think "を書いといた方がいいと思います❕
あと、becauseを文頭に持ってくる時は、"That’s because "を使った方が減点されない❕

目で習うは"with their eyes."

口語ならfor exampleは、文頭、文中、文末のどこに置いてもいいですが、文語では文頭に置くのが原則ですよ~

最後、I thinkが I thingになってるよ❕
焦ってたりするとスペルミス増えるから本番気をつけてね~

補足

最後から2文目は私なら
It's important and interesting to have a relationship with foreign people.
って書きます、参考程度に…❕

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ありがとうございます！！すごく参考になりました！！

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勉強頑張ってください~❕