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あかかああ

文章を英語で書いたのですが、おかしなところがあったら教えてください！

高校では軽音楽部に入っていました。私は軽音楽部で、エレキギターとドラムとキーボードの担当をしていました。私は9歳からピアノを習っていたので、キーボードは簡単に弾くことができました。ギターは12歳から始めていたので、少しは弾けます。ドラムは部活に入ってから始めたので、なかなか上達しませんでした。しかし、高校2年からは殆ど弾けるようになって、バンドメンバーで曲を弾くのがとても楽しかったです。高校1年と高校2年の時は文化祭で弾くことが出来たけど、高校３年では文化祭がコロナで中止になってしまたので弾けませんでした。

I was in the band club in high school. I was in charge of electric guitar, drums and keyboards in the band club.I've been learning the piano since I was 9 years old, so the keyboard was easy to play. I started playing the guitar when I was 12 years old, so I can play a little. I started playing drums after joining club activities, so I didn't improve much. However, since I was in my second year of high school, I was able to play most of the songs, and it was a lot of fun to play songs with band members. When I was in my first and second year of high school, I was able to play at the school festival, but in my third year of high school, the school festival was canceled at COVID19,so I couldn't play.

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H.R.

僕が書いた英文です。良かったら参考程度にして下さい。
あかかああさんの英文も間違ってはないと思います！

In high school, I was in the band club. I was in charge of electric guitar, drums, and keyboards in the light music club. I had been taking piano lessons since I was nine years old, so I could play the keyboard easily. I started playing the guitar when I was 12, so I could play a little. I started playing the drums after I joined a club, so it was hard for me to improve. However, from my second year of high school, I could play most of them, and it was very fun to play songs with the band members. In my first and second year of high school, I was able to play at the school festival, but in my third year of high school, the festival was canceled due to Corona, so I couldn't play.

あかかああ

全文、書いてくださりありがとうございます！
参考にさせていただきます！