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TOPIC: Will artificial intelligence take away people's job?
Efficiency/Employment/New technology/Education
Some people say that artificial intelligence won't take away people's job. On the other hand, others say not. I agree with the latter idea and have two reasons why I think so.
One reason is that artificial intelligence is efficiency. For example, it often occurs that there isn't any clerk on registers all over the world gradually, such as supermartets. By doing so, it saves costs of employment and time.
Another reason is that artificial intelligence can be helpful of education. For instance, Chat GPT can nave a positive impact. on checking witting of us. In adition, it leads us to suggest
better idea.
All in all, it is for the reasons mentioned above that it is necessary for people to utilize artificial intelligence.

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