Question

ともか

英検2級のライティング問題です！文法を全般に英文を書くのが苦手なため下の文が文的に間違ってないか見てほしいです！どなたか回答お願いします🙇‍♀🙇‍♀　

①I think that Japan use the Internet for people to vote in elections is a good idea.
②I think that opening 24 hours a day at convenience stores is a not good idea.

Answer 1

Mike_teacher

これでわかりますか？

Answer 2

ve

①I think it is a good idea that Japan uses the Internet for voting in elections.
②I think that opening convenience stores for 24 hours a day is not a good idea.

①はfor peopleをどんな意味で使ったのかよくわからないので、書きたい英文の日本語訳を教えて頂けると直しやすいです！