Had the global community taken more decisive action against climate change decades ago, we might have avoided the current environmental crisis, which【, as most scientists now point out,】 is posing a significant threat to our biodiversity.
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Had the global community taken more decisive action against climate change decades ago, we might have avoided the current environmental crisis, which is posing a significant threat to our biodiversity.
これで少しは英文の骨格が少しははっきりしませんか?
