Question

ぴひょ

英作文添削をお願いします。
（問の和訳）将来、映画館は存在すると思いますか? 答えを 30 ～ 40 語程度で説明してください。

（答）I think that cinemas will exist in the future. The reason is that animes and dramas are watched at a cinema these days. Also, they are very popular around many people.

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zmic

✅ I think that cinemas will exist in the future.
✅✅ I think that cinemas will still exist in the future.
✅✅ I think that cinemas will continue to exist in the future.

✅ The reason is that animes and dramas are watched at a cinema these days.
👉 Anime and drama can also be watched at home.
✅ The reason is that animes and dramas can be watched at a cinema these days.

△ Also, they are very popular around many people.

❌ popular around many people
✅ popular with many people
✅ popular in Japan
✅ popular around Tokyo

👉 use "therefore" to conclude your argument.
✅ Therefore, cinemas will remain popular with many people.
👉 use "also" for a second reason
✅ Also, cinemas will remain popular with people who enjoy watching movies on a big screen.

I think that cinemas will continue to exist in the future. The reason is that animes and dramas can be watched at a cinema these days. Therefore, cinemas will remain popular with many people.

ぴひょ

ありがとうございます！！