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① some people say that it is impartant for
university students to take gym classes. Do you agree with this opinion?
② Today, some kindergartens have started teaching English to children. Do yo think it is a good idea to teach English to children in kindergartens?

Ⓒ I think that it is important for university students
to take gym classes. I have two reason.
Frist. It is important for people to move their body.
If they hardly move their body they will not Health.
It is important to . became health.
they can live for a long time.
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Second, they haven't chance to move their body
in the future.
If they take grm classes
chance to
mave their body.
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Therefore I think that it is important
university students to take gym classes
they can have
@ I don't think it is a good idea to teach English
to
children in Kindergrtens. I have the two reason.
Frist, It is hard for Children to study English.
They haven't speak. Japanese language well yet.
It is impposible for them understand English.
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Secand, It is hard for teachers in kindergartens to teach English.
The theachers have to take care of children.
They is to a busy to teach English.
Therefore, I don't think it is
good idea to teach
Kinderghtons
English to
Children
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Answer 1

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y.takano

②は概ね良いと思います

y.takano

添付忘れました

受験生

ありがとうございます！
とても助かりました！