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I don't think it is
beneficial for nakers to change
jobs often. I have two
reasons. In the first place,
they will take a
long
time to get used to
the Tob. If they can't
do it, they will cause
mistakes. In the second place,
their on lautes won't be stable.
When they change new job,
they get tew salaries. By
doing so, they won't live
their life with sately about
money. Therefore, they shouldn't
charge Jobs often!

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