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nana

添削して欲しいです。この作文が66単語で、70単語ほしいので少し足りていないです！言い回しを変えられる部分や付け足せることがあれば、教えて欲しいです！！😖🙌🏻

I agree with the increase in foreign tourists around 高校名.
This is because, they can communicate with many people who come from different countries.They can improve international communication skil if they communicate with foreign tourists. Now, it is necessary in the world. So, they should be able to speak English, not just write it.
Therefore, I think increasing in foreign tourists around 高校名 is good.

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ぽーちき

canをbe able to に

should をought toに

とかでしょうか。。