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No, I don't. I have two reasons. First, students shouldn't be made to study by someone. To begin with, they should be interested in studying. Second, there are many things which are more important than studying.
If you are interested in something do it. Therefore, I don't think homework is necessary for students.
ここの部分が何を伝えたいのかがいまいち汲み取れなかったので教えて頂きたいです、。
その文章なら特に問題に思う箇所はないので大丈夫です！
youではなくstudentsの方が良いと思います。
すみません、確かにstudentsのほうが絶対いいです、申し訳ないです
お二人とも丁寧に教えて頂きありがとうございました。
👍 well done
✅✅ No, I don't. I have two reasons. First, students shouldn't be made to study.
🟠 To begin with, they should be interested in studying.
✅ They should be interested in studying to begin with.
✅ Second, there are many things which are more important than studying.
🟠 If you are interested in something do it.
✅ If you are interested in something, do it.
✅ If you are interested in something, then do it. <--- casual style, spoken language
✅ If you are interested in something, you should do it. <--- formal style
✅ If students/people are interested in something, they should do it.
✅ If students/people are interested in something, they should do it voluntarily.
✅ If students/people are interested in something, they should do it of their own will.
✅ Therefore, I don't think homework is necessary for students.
添削ありがとうございます。
ifの文はいろいろ誤字っていて、
If you are interested in something, you should do it. にしたかったです。
その次の文は全体のまとめです。