➤ Don't use capitals after a comma (,)
❌ Because of, Entering ...
✅ Because of, entering ...
❌ First of all, It is ...
✅ First of all, it is ...
❌❌ more much people
✅ more people
✅ much more people
🟠 it is easy for much more people to visit museums.
✅✅ it makes it easier for people to visit museums.
✅✅ it allows more people to visit museums.
❌❌ Because of, (S) (V) (O).
✅ (S1) (V1) <O1> because (S2) (V2) <O2>. The train was late because it snowed.
✅ Because of <reason>, (S) (V) (O). Because of the snow, the train was late.
✅ (S) (V) (O) because of <reason>. The train was late because of the snow.
❌❌ Because of, entering museums for free is helpful for...
🟠 Because entering museums for free is helpful for...
✅ Making museums free is helpful for...
✅✅ helpful for poor people and people who want to save money.
🟠 Second, donations of people can support running museums.
✅ Secondly, museums can be supported by donations.
🟠 People who want to learn in museums must donate museums a lot of money.
✅ People who want to study in museums should donate money.
❌ For these reason,
✅ For these reasons,
I hope this helps!