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I disagree that Big companies u
have a positive effect on
society. I have two reasons. I
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the environment to producet
Large-scale products. Big company
mode a lot of products
, so they use maturials such
as water, electric and gos@
Also, they discharge carbou
dioxide. By doing so, global
warming will be increasing. Seally
worker is difficult to protect @
Nork-life balance. Big companies
ask them for many job iro
home
go they will
go
@
a
at late night. Also some poode
have to move their house
for working. They will lose
their free time, and tell..
tired. Therefore, big companien
have a lot of pod
points. I think people should
work widdle or small companies
than big companies, and goople
will
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Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer.
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• Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion
Suggested length: 120-150 words
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answer sheet.
Any writing outside the space will not be graded.
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TOPIC
Agree or disagree: Big companies have a positive effect on society
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Answer 1

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さとし

1.Big→big(1行目)
2.electric→electricity
3.job→jobs
4.fell→feel
5.I think people should work middle 〜.
→〜 in middle or small companies than in 〜.

目立つ間違いは多分これぐらいかと思います
参考になれば幸いです

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