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限界jk

英検準1級のwriting添削してほしいです！
あと文字数が足りてないので付け足した方がいいこととか教えてください🙇🏻‍♀️😭

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• Write an essay on the given TOPIC.
• Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer.
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• Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion
• Suggested length: 120-150 words
• Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of yo
answer sheet.
Any writing outside the space will not be graded.
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Career goals
Motivation
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I Yes, it is. I agree that it is beneficial for workers to change job often because
you can get many experience and motivation to change job. I
First, you can work many jobs. For example, you can be a police man and
doctor and so on. They have different idea. So, talking to them,
you can get a new view.
Second, you can get motivation for a job. In the office, there are
many people who have pation. It is important to talk to them.
You can get good impact.
For these reasons, I agree this topic.
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I want to work at many places in the future. And I want to spend
good time.

英検 writing

Answer 1

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まかろんししょう

写真は、私ならこう書くってやつ。ただし、完璧ではないので参考までに。
英検対策のノートも出してるから見てみて。それで準一受かったって方法書いてる。
あと、私は出だしとおしりをいつも固定することで字数を安定させてる。
I agree /disagree with this issue. I have two reasons to support my opinion.
Therefore, people... （能動と受動の態を逆にして主張を書く）
やってみて〜
字数は反対意見への考慮をすると増えるで。

限界jk

わーありがとうございます！ノートも見てきます😌