Question

りぼん

大学を志望した理由及び学びたいことや目標を英作文で書かなければならないのですが、どなたか添削して頂けないでしょうか🙏🏻

2022
There are
two reasons why I applied.
to learn.
The first one is that it is important for me
English.
think that learning English is broaden my
I
horizons..
The second one is that I like English
to study English.
Also,
there
are
two goals.
First, I want to become able to read English. If I had
studied English, I could read it now.
Second, I
become able to speak English.
Because, Japan is increasing the foreign tourists.
For these reasons and goals, I applied for this university.
want to
English. It is fun for me

Answer 1

たー

よりアカデミックにするなら、
Firstly, & Secondly が良きです！

りぼん

ありがとうございます！