Question

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英作文を書いたので間違っているところがないか添削して頂きたいです。よろしくお願いします。

Q
Today in Japan, many buildings and public areas have
lot of lights used during Christmas. Do you think
This is a good idea ?
意見と理由2つ
Yes, I think this is a good idea. I have two reasons for this.
it is fun for us. to see a lot of lights.
are not scary the night road.
we
First,
Second,