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The Statue of Liberty is
93 meters tall and 225 tons in weight.
The Statue of Liberty is holding.
torch in her right hand.
In the past, the torch quided ships.
Lat night.
Kota said "How interesting!!!
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He saw a leaflet.
The leaslet tells the history of the statue.
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Jina and Kota enjoyed a musical.
He said "The English was difficult,
but I enjoyed it."
They will buy Eri a
pamphlet.
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Kota Said New York is amazing and
there are a lot of fun things to do there.
Mr. Rios said to Kota " You can come back to
New York any time."
Tina said to Kota "Now you
to stay."
Kota said "I'll be back."
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Answer 1

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1文目と2文目がどちらも
The Statue of Liberty is ~
で始まってます。
英語は繰り返しを嫌うので、2文目の文頭は代名詞に置き換えて
It is ~
とするのが良いと思います。
他は良いと思います。