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明治学院大学2020 A日程の英作文の添削をお願いしたいです。どこが良くてどこが悪いか、詳細に言っていただけるとありがたいです🙇‍♀️

明治学院大-ABM
12 2020 年度 英語
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治室院 2020
A日経
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204 (b)1.(c)). (M2)
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4 There are many type o ois talkes while ne are livins.
Among them, I choae 150me istakes that I: hone exReriened.
First,Go shoping is betaer then onlite sha Ppine
When I Mas a fist rode Student of high School, I baoht the shoes
that I hacd Bund for many rears at Merkeri.
I certinly ordered the Shoes op 20cm, but it didht fit for me.
So I recoo hize Sobe thine that I will do' mith me direct Saeing.
Secand. NatchinO m mouce
When I was 7 rears old, Iト and one of my friend here fiohtin
due to abart schoollunch. 1hen I csed dirt words or him。
And our teacher Said to me Watch youyauce.! Yau have to think
his emotion! Fron then, I have been considering ofher Rer Son's thinkinb.
There fore I think this two happening Make leople better.
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