Question

おもち

間違っているところの正しい表現の仕方を教えてください🙏

I agree to Ken opinion.
To teach cleaning skill for other people is important.
For example, many people get cleaning skill.I think our town will be very clean.

Answer 1

🍙おにぎり🍙 #Belle🥀とペア画中

I agree with Ken's opinion.
To teach cleaning skill for other people is important.
For example, I think our town will be very clean if many people get cleaning skills.
ではないでしょうか？

🍙おにぎり🍙 #Belle🥀とペア画中

最後の文はget the skill のほうが自然です！

Answer 2

omisa

2行目は「It's important to teach cleaning skill for other people.」の表現の方がいいと思います！
3行目では「I think that if many people get that skill,our town will be very clean.」という表現のほうが良いんじゃないかなって思います！