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m3

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A Country I wart to yisit
A country I want to visit is Finlond, which is located in
hothern FuropeI have two main reasonswhy I want to g0 there,
st, Iwant to see the aurora and Santa Claus. The aurora
Can oppear on 200 nights a year in the part of the country- Houever,
Tcont see them in Jopon, So SOmeday I wit see a lot. of aurora
in Finlond with my Own eyes. Also Everyone brows that 'Santa
Claus comes trom Finlord. His official hometown Welcomes レisitors
all year round, 50 I would like to visit to0
Second, I have something (o krow about Finlond. There is femous
for being the Happiest Count ry in the world. I wonder why
Finland is said to be a happiest Cantry, So I woula like to g0
there and find Out the answer.
For these reasons, Iwont to visit Finland

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Answer 1

Xx_Saskia_xX

とても上手く書けてます。
気づいた点です。

~I will see a lot of aurora~ ❌
~I want to see a lot of auroras~⭕

Also, Everyone ~❌
Also, everyone ~⭕

There is famous for being the Happiest Country~❌
It is famous for being the happiest country~⭕

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