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わたわた

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日本語訳
こんにちは、今朝、朝食を食べましたか？今日は私のお気に入りの朝食を紹介したいと思います。私は日本食が好きです。なぜなら体にいいからです。私が一番おすすめするのはお茶漬けです。なぜなら時短になるのと消化にもいいそして作るのが簡単だからです。さらにアレンジすることで取りたい栄養素を摂ることができます。ちなみに私はわさび茶漬けが好きです。ぜひこの朝ごはんを食べてみてください。聞いてくれてありがとう。

Hello. Did you have breakfast this moning?
I would like to introduce breakfast today.
I like Japanese-style break fast.
Because it is good for the health.
I recommend the most is rise Soaked in
green
Because it saving time, is good for digestion and is easy
to make.
tea.
In addition to arranging, want to take nutrients you
can take.
as a side note, I like wasabi chazuke the most.
Plese try to eat this breakfast if you
Thank.
for listening
you
want.

Answer 1

taka

Hello everyone. Did you have breakfast today?
Actually, I would like to introduce my favorite breakfast now.

I like Japanese food because it is good for our body.
I recommend“ochazuke”(rice with green tea) the most because it is good to digest and can be made quickly and easily. Moreover, you can take in desired nutrients by arranging it in various ways.

By the way, I love“wasabi chazuke”(rice with green tea and wasabi).
Please try eating ochazuke for your breakfast.
Thank you for listening.

参考にしてください。

Answer 2

liaqn(^^)

Hello.
I have a question for you.
Did you have a breakfast this morning?
Today, I'd like to introduse about breakfast.
I like Japanese-style breakfast because tiis goog for health.
私ならこうしますが如何でしょうか。他は大丈夫だと思います。